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Cloud/Seph! (I don't want to make Aeris unhappy, but it is still my OTP.) I hope Cloud will be okay.

Oh good graces, what on Earth is Sephiroth going to do to poor Cloud? XD

Love Hojo's thoughts and regrets about how he treated Cloud before.. love.

Also, I was oddly touched by the misquito repellent part. Such a humdrum thing for Sephiroth to say, but it felt like he was saying *more* somehow.. as if the mere fact that he could say such a humdrum thing to his father made him think, or happy, or something. Or the fact that he remembered such a tiny complaint meant he himself was becoming more loving and thoughtful.

It was just.. touching.

Hey!! Look at you! Typing up a bran' spankin' new masterpiece and you don't even letta bitch know?!

I see how it is.

Oh, but I am digging it so far! I'm reeeeeeeally not sure about liking this Sakura chick - and it's not just because she's stealing my man, no. I'm sincerely just not ready to like her at all.. and I know Hojo's fucking brilliant and all, but he's.. eh... well he's just liking her TOO much, dammit.

Your Strife still cracks me the hell up.

Jus' sayin'.

And when the hell are we going to see some Sephiroth spawn, eh? EH?

I know you'll deliver.. Savaial ALWAYS delivers. Rock on, babe.

-Savannah

WOMAN! How did you do this so friggin quick??

Ohhh bliss! I love Hojo so much!! I'm psyched that this is centered around him, seriously. And your Cloud is so neurotic and CUTE! XD aaah! I love him and all his wierd little problems and finnicky little traits!

And I don't think it's possible for sex to get more gratuitous than that.. I feel bad for Aerith's vajayjay. Well.. no, actually I don't, this is Sephiroth we're talking about. Did they actually get married? I can totally see them just eloping, or else just calling themselves married by the power invested in the General, can't see Seph doing the whole cut the cake thing, haha!

So, like a greedy whore, I say, MOOOOREE!

Sephcounttheways, you kill me.

Chapters won't be as fast now that I've got some stuff to take care of. (sigh) Real life doesn't like writers.

Yeah, they got married for real. I'll go into the wedding later, but they got a Justice of the Peace wedding, just like I did in Virginia 11 years ago today, lol. I imagine fondly that Sephiroth told LabCorp to talk to his father about the blood test.

Sephiroth- "My father keeps buckets of my blood. Call him. He should have some of Aerith's, too. Here's his number- 526-293-4656."

LabCorp Technician- "......"


Thanks for the R&R! So much more impetus for writing when I read the reviews!

Here comes Daddy! Please, no one panic. Miss Savaial shall provide hypo-proof body armor and flotation devices.

KD

Eheheheheh. I really like your Hojo. You also have a way of making OCs come alive to me. It's a great skill.

Thank you, Rana, KD. I love the feedback, no matter how it comes to me.

Rana, thank you. Stick with me and you'll see the characters you love.