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by Savaial

schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love uncle Syvas, total peach. It was also really cute to see Sephiroth say something sweet about his future son.

And Hojo all silly goose high playing the violin was really cute, too! I dunno, but if I was Sakura I'd feel a little awkward with the fams, like an outsider, but she seems to feel at home, and that's good.
person Ranna
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Keepin' it slow, huh? That's fine, I love the way you build tension. Love, love, love.
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. Was that a real song he played? Gosh, you are way too good at teasing us with these "almost" scenes.
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i just caught up with the story and i really enjoy it! Please continue!
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Having Sephiroth constantly intrude upon your thoughts would be one gigantic pain in the ass.

It's really cute to watch, though. I admit, I get a little embarassed for Aerith and Hojo at times, lol. Oh well, such is what you'd have to put up with for the privelege of gazing upon Sephiroth day in and day out.
person Savaial
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the feedback, guys! Makes the writing so much easier and nicer. This chapter may seem a little bit like filler, but I promise it is character development/introduction. So, love the reviews!
person Ranna
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Sorry I haven't reviewed, my connection has gone down the drain.
schedule November 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww yeah! xD Nothing like a 420 hit to get things relaxed. ;D Awesome chapter, and of course as always can't wait for more! *Gets contact* xDDD
person Ranna
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love how you make the most mundane details interesting. Yay! Photos of Sephiroth!
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha that was great. I'm surprised Aeris didn't get airsick xD Well she' not like yuffie or Cloud obviously. lol. ♥ Can't wait to see what happens next. :D