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for Shadows within darkness

by schwaerze

person Madisuzy
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*flails* Now that is one evil cliffhanger! I'm so glad I found your story on here. So many chapters I hadn't read. Fantastic developement of Vincent and Yazoo's relationship. Loving the Vincent the vampire history....still hate Lucrecia though! LOL. I was so releaved when Vin told her to bugger off! Yeah Vin!! Can't wait for more. Thanks for updating!
person Lamica
schedule August 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh finally an update! Though with how busy I've been it took me forever to read it. *laughs* Mother, that's great and the whole bit about Zack kicking Gen's ass, that's funny as hell too. xD Hope you're feeling better, I know very well how much it sucks to be sick, seems like these days I'm always sick xP Hope to see an update soon, well as soon as you can since you already know how hooked I am. ♥
person Rina
schedule August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha, Zack is still good old friendly chirpy Zack! XD The way you write him - he's very easy to like.

Eeep! Mother as an ancient Queen vampire? Scary. *runs away and hides*

I'm sorry you didn't get to do the het but I loved this update...gives you more of an insight into the personality Vincent is developing. And at least he can sense pure evil when he sees it *coughsephirothcough*

Can't wait to see how the hunt goes! (or how badly it fails...)
person Rina76
schedule August 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOVED this update! Vincent's background is spellbinding. When he's taken into the 'dining room', it so reminds me of the Anne Rice book, Vittorio the Vampire (one of her best works, I think) This was an amazing read, my girl. It's like a whole other story and I was utterly crestfallen when the chapter ended! I require more...

Hell YES, do some het! I wanna see how you handle it and if you can make it as hot as your yaoi. It will be something completely different for you and I can't wait to read it! *is excited*
person fyrbyrd
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I'm fine. Sorry to seem neglectful, I am still reading, fearing what is going to happen in the future... As for my baby, well I kind of got lost on where to go. But then I read a Dissidia fic last night and an idea formed, now I just need the time to sit down and type it up. Yes I've gotten into Dissidia, and it was only from watching a test game at the last con I was at. So keep up the good work, I want to read more...
person Lamica
schedule July 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sephiroth... *Swoons* Yes I did enjoy this chapter and Hojo... *Fans self* I have a big infatuation with him as well xD I guess as far as Vincent/Lucrecia het; I say go for it. ^_^ It's not like it's going to burn our brains or anything, I'm sure we've all read het fic one time or another. ♥
person Sillhouttegirl
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read many fanfics lately, cause they all seem to disappoint me greatly. However, your Shadows within Darkness, I adore it so much!!!! >.< You're a genius I cannot wait till chapter 41.
And btw <.< Im glad that Bitch is Lucrecia is gone. WOO xD
<3
person Seira
schedule July 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
personaly i would rather not read any vin/lu

but i love you writing please keep it up ^^
person fyrbyrd
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You hadme worrying a little there.but still I can't shake the feeling the bitch ain't finished with them yet.
person darkmorgainelefay (Chephren)
schedule July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey Love!!

I love the way this chapter went! That last scene where Lu got kicked to the curb was absolutely badass!! XD I am so glad Vin came around... I felt so bad for poor Yaz, but I loved that he stood up and was the voice of reason here. Thank you for posting! This story is fantastic. TTYL!! *glomps*