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July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
About frickin' time you came to your senses, Vince! *cheering from the sidelines here* Seriously, who in their right mind would choose that selfish harpy over gorgeous little Yazoo? I'm glad to see Vincent is not /that/ stupid.
I think I was gloating over her departure almost as much as Yazoo was. Heh. Good riddance, bitch! *slams the door loudly after her*
Wow, finally a chapter where something /good/ happens at the end! No nasty cliffhanger for once. Now I am really curious to hear Vincent's story as I'm sure it's a terrific one. Will it end with sex, like Yazoo's version of fairytales? lol
(Btw, I can't believe this is the 40th chapter! You've done some incredible work on this fic, huh? Is there still a lot to go or are you getting near the finish? I will be sad to see it end but know it must one day)
I think I was gloating over her departure almost as much as Yazoo was. Heh. Good riddance, bitch! *slams the door loudly after her*
Wow, finally a chapter where something /good/ happens at the end! No nasty cliffhanger for once. Now I am really curious to hear Vincent's story as I'm sure it's a terrific one. Will it end with sex, like Yazoo's version of fairytales? lol
(Btw, I can't believe this is the 40th chapter! You've done some incredible work on this fic, huh? Is there still a lot to go or are you getting near the finish? I will be sad to see it end but know it must one day)
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July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha, she got served. *Snickers* Two gil says she's going to run back to Sephiroth. *Swoon* I want to see him again... oh well xD D: I want more though! Please say you'll update soon? :3 ♥ I'm greedy.
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July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No. No! NO! Don't...don't leave! :( You two belong together!
What the hell is wrong with Vincent? It's like he's got no balls anymore. I liked him with balls. He's been castrated by a meddling, interfering wench, that's what's happened. Grr, hate her even more now. Especially after what she said to Yazoo, how she insulted him right to his face. Bitch. *makes cranky expression*
Damn. Guess the Botox isn't working.
Great update, though! ^__^ Yazoo is a smart little cookie. He knows /exactly/ what's going on. Too bad Vincent is too thick-headed to realise it. Ah well, he'll soon learn his lesson. *nods primly*
(btw, can I quit my job and become a student like you? Maybe then I'd get some more updates done. *sighs heavily and feels like a failure*)
What the hell is wrong with Vincent? It's like he's got no balls anymore. I liked him with balls. He's been castrated by a meddling, interfering wench, that's what's happened. Grr, hate her even more now. Especially after what she said to Yazoo, how she insulted him right to his face. Bitch. *makes cranky expression*
Damn. Guess the Botox isn't working.
Great update, though! ^__^ Yazoo is a smart little cookie. He knows /exactly/ what's going on. Too bad Vincent is too thick-headed to realise it. Ah well, he'll soon learn his lesson. *nods primly*
(btw, can I quit my job and become a student like you? Maybe then I'd get some more updates done. *sighs heavily and feels like a failure*)
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June 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
;~; Yazoo ♥
Dammit Vincent... *Kicks him* xD Loved this update, can't wait till you update again. ^,^ ♥
Dammit Vincent... *Kicks him* xD Loved this update, can't wait till you update again. ^,^ ♥
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June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
^,^ I'm sure you can do it! You just need to act it out in your head that's all. I don't remember if I reviewed this yet, but I love the angst and the tension in this chapter. I can't wait, of course for your next update; hope it's sometime soon if you can get over your block :3 ♥
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June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, you promised drama and you certainly didn't disappoint! Vincent hugging her was a surprise and kind of touching for an aloof creature like him. Didn't think he'd do something like that so it shows how much feeling he still has for her. Her reaction to finding out about Yazoo & Vincent's relationship was interesting. Makes me wonder what she really wants and why she's really there. She's so hiding something. She might act all nice and innocent, just wanting to see an old friend, but someone like her would totally have an agenda up their sleeve.
Yazoo's reaction was to be expected. More cold jealousy and I can't say I blame him. What's with all these people from Vincent's past just dropping in unannounced? Haven't they heard of sending a letter first? Or a telegram? Hell, even a courier pigeon would be helpful. lol
Poor boy though, getting dragged out of the room and having a door shut in his face. No wonder he's worried. And pissed.
My favourite line is this: "Actually Vincent appreciates my beauty very much and on a rather regular basis too..." Haha, go Yaz! *cheers* Put that bitch in her place, yo. (sorry, had to say that in Reno-voice for some reason XD)
Well-described update with lots of conflicting emotions from all the parties concerned. Knowing you, I suspect the conflict is only going to increase dramatically from here and I have a strange feeling Yazoo might get terribly hurt somewhere along the line. :( I dunno how you keep the tension up in this fic but that's one of your skills and it's what makes us keep hanging on your every precisely-written word! Ack, too much drama! *needs Botox to smooth out worry lines on forehead*
Yazoo's reaction was to be expected. More cold jealousy and I can't say I blame him. What's with all these people from Vincent's past just dropping in unannounced? Haven't they heard of sending a letter first? Or a telegram? Hell, even a courier pigeon would be helpful. lol
Poor boy though, getting dragged out of the room and having a door shut in his face. No wonder he's worried. And pissed.
My favourite line is this: "Actually Vincent appreciates my beauty very much and on a rather regular basis too..." Haha, go Yaz! *cheers* Put that bitch in her place, yo. (sorry, had to say that in Reno-voice for some reason XD)
Well-described update with lots of conflicting emotions from all the parties concerned. Knowing you, I suspect the conflict is only going to increase dramatically from here and I have a strange feeling Yazoo might get terribly hurt somewhere along the line. :( I dunno how you keep the tension up in this fic but that's one of your skills and it's what makes us keep hanging on your every precisely-written word! Ack, too much drama! *needs Botox to smooth out worry lines on forehead*
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June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ugh! What a bastard!
/too mad at Vincent to comment about anything else.
/too mad at Vincent to comment about anything else.
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June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo, that was /great/. So very, very toe-curlingly sexy and HOT. You write these two together just perfectly. I love the thought of Yazoo begging so desperately and wow, he should talk more during sex because he comes up with great twisted fairytales! (I still giggle remembering the alternate ending he once created, about the prince and the princess going back to the castle to bang lol)
*sighs in foreboding and mentally prepares self for the next chapter*
*sighs in foreboding and mentally prepares self for the next chapter*
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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY FOR SMEEEX!! XD Great sexy chapter hunny! ^.~ *glomp*
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June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm, I love it when Vincent makes Yazoo purr. Thank you, a little better, but my son's been off school for two days and we have a long weekend this weekend. So I'm working on the next, Revealations. Hopeful to finish tomorrow or monday. Did I tell you I have an old unfinshed Sentinel story called Shadows In The Darkness?