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by Shehanitan

person Salamandor
schedule June 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't really tell if I like or dislike Kouri. I mean, he sounds HOT AS HELL. But at the same time I really don't wan anyone else to touch Squall but Seifer! Hahaha

But damn,that end scene was soooo hot. You are so good with your scene setting. :D I just love this story. Thanks so much for writing for us.
person DWC
schedule June 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like Kouri, too. It doesn't seem that he is the typical, manipulative evil bastard...yet.
person IntHellsing
schedule May 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
/huffs at puffs at your sails. ;)
person Vinny
schedule January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The business is getting taken over by Lioness. Do I sense Rinoa making an appearance?
I love how Squall seduces Seifer but its sweet he gives Seifer the option to stop.
It's so cute how possesive Squall is of Seifer. However my favourite scene aside the sex,
is the scene where Seifer asks advice from his grandma. He really is country boy.
schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:D Completely worth the wait.
person YACUMO
schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it.... LOL you really know how to get someone's expectations high with those wonderful and descriptive sensual scenes of you.
It is a shame as you said that you can´t update sooner...but anyways it was a good chapter.

Would be lovely to see Seifer release that natural top he has inside.

Bye
person Vovo
schedule December 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!! You have to update this story! It’s been so long since your last update and I keep coming here looking for the next chapter...
I think it was amazing to see Squall as the one who goes after Seifer. I love Squall seducing him. Seifer is so naive that it’s hard to believe, but it’s fun this way too! This story is very good to read, I enjoy it so much! Don’t stop it here, it’s so rare to see them like that.
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*fans self* My lord, Squall is extremely sexy when he's being slutty and aggressive. Mrow! For being only an almost-sex scene, this one had me all hot and bothered.
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, Squall's a bit of a tramp, isn't he? I don't know how I feel about that. I wish Kouri would disappear.

But the Seifer/Squall bit was hot. :)
schedule September 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooof! Tingles for me! This was a fantastic chapter!
I'm so glad you updated!
More! Please!! :)