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for Office Follies

by Shehanitan

person Vinny
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Squall got his guy, but now he's sort of got him will he grow bored of him.
He seems like a guy who enjoys the chase. Poor Seifer trying so hard to resist.
So cute. Kouri(forgot his name) what is he going to do? Keep up the great work!

Vinny
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Man. You're so good.
This is the hottest not-actually-sex scene I've read since... well. since your last one. ;DD

Looking forward to moar plz. <3
person Salamandor
schedule August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaaaay!!! I didn't expect it so quickly! I am so happy~

And oh my god, I love Squall as the... aggressor? so very very much. That end scene was amazingly hot and I am just about to go to bed... I don't think I will be able to! xD Seifer is such a cutie. And I honestly really enjoy that you keep it realistic! With Seifer feeling disgust at what he was doing, it's very true and not "sweetened" with frilly words and stuff. I just adore the way you write!

And now to play the waiting game with myself. Though whatever you decide to update first gives me just the same happiness!(I seriously visit your page every day.... sometimes just reread some chapters or stories. hehe)
person Rangiku
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAy!!!! an UPDate!!!
*dance in joy*
There's finally progress with the couple.
it's really hard imagining Seifer being so clueless, but that gave a certain cuteness to him..
kinda adorable.
The garden scene is really really Hot, but it's too bad he din't manage to go all the way~!
Tee hee~~~
Truly, your works are captivating, i can't take my eyes off the chapters at all..
Keep it up~~

Will always support u,
Rangiku =P
person Salamandor
schedule August 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Siiigh please update this story soon... I am dying! I like To Trust a Cop too, but I really wanna read more of this, too! You are my favorite fanfic author. Everything you write is so awesome.
person Haven
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Totally dig this story! CAn't wait to see how the trip turns out!
person crimson
schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol, toys for the cat or for the owner? whoa, seifer and squall on a trip together, can't wait :)
person Salamandor
schedule May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ahaha Seifer and Griever are so awesome together. XD And ugh it's taking too long for them to get together!! Though it's just me being impatient, the pace to the story is very good! I don't really like Kouri... but again... just my Seifer/Squall bias going on. Anyone touching Squall angers me. XD
person Vinny the Vampire
schedule May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoo Hoo! Things are progressing...slowly. Is Seifer a virgin? My poor baby! lol!
I wonder what is going to happen on the Dollet trip. Is Squall going to seduce Seifer?
Lol! Squall was jealous of teh cat...so cute! I can't wait for teh next update.
schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update! I like how the story is progressing. I can *hopefully* see something happening whilst the two are in Dollet. Poor Griever though! Who will look after him!?

I did enjoy this chapter, please keep up the good work :)