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for Office Follies

by Shehanitan

schedule May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This wait is hurting me a lot more than it's hurting Squall.
But oh. Ohh. I'm so sure it's going to be worth it.
I'm in love with this Seifer.
schedule May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this story a lot.
I'm looking forward to some Squifer action!
Keep going!
person crimson
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like how Squall is being the dominating one and although I was a bit unsure about the naive Seifer, he kinda grows on you. All in all, it's a very interesting read.

Aww, poor Seifer, how will he ever be able to handle working (literally) under Squall now.
person 90McPhee
schedule April 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I like how the characters are acting differently, it changes up the story well. Thanks for the update, and I can't wait to read more!
person Rangiku
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
O.O.... *nose bleed*
ahem... pardon me... *takes tissue, wipes off blood*

dat was really really HOT~~!!!
Seifer's jus so cute i feel like strangling... ahem... i mean.. squeezing him to death..
I'm still not used to such a direct Squall but it's really somethin refreshing, and i still like him the way u portray him
I can't wait till the part where Seifer and Squall goes on with it..
and i'm even more curious on what happens after that..


Hugs and Kisses for encouragement~~~
And a Special Cat biscuit for Griever XD
Rangiku
person Sweet
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm~ Yummy. That was my food for tonight (desert included). That was exactly what I needed after a long day at work. It's a very different characterization that what I normally take on the pairing, but that was the entire point of it after all. It'll be interesting to see how it'll all turn out.

Keep up the gorgeously yummy work~
person Vinny The Vampire
schedule April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Seifer is growing up! No longer is he naive! lol! He got turned on by Squall!
I wonder what is happening with the company? Is Seifer going to be jealous of Kouri?
Is Squall going to be more active in his lustful feelings towards Seifer? He was quite passive in this chapter!

person lightning
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot! He he I don't mind Kouri, I liked this chapter lol and what happened was needed I believe for Seifer to realize what he's missing he he. *has images of Squall on the desk* *nosebleed* LOL well done once again!
person agkelos
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooh, an innocent Seifer....def interesting. Hardly ever seen such an aggressive Squall. Purrrrr...
person lightning
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok time for me to start paying attention to your other stories too. This one I like, it was nicely writen and all even though it's really strange for me that Seifer is the confused one in this whole thing but I've got to read more in order to say more. It was an interesting start though, well done!