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for A Picnic... With Michael

by fyrbyrd074

person MoggiyeM
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"Your mama’s a damn good lay, and I am so glad you don’t understand a word that I am saying kid."

xD best line ever!
schedule December 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! You have to do another one please...
person Redeyes
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You don't see a lot of cloud/yazoo fics these days but I enjoy it even though I'm more a reno/yazoo person. I really like to see at least one more chapter, mostly to see Yazoo and Vincent together. My FF7 faves are Reno, Yazoo and Vincent so I love to see any combo with two or even three of these guys. lol. But I like the plot of this as well and I did read Knoucked up and enjoyed it a bit as well.
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was entertaining, especially the two fathers interacting with their child XD I aso liked the 'love triangle' between Cloud,Vincent and Yazoo and would love to see a sequel where Vincent tries to get on Yazoo´s good side again!
person RJaneyP
schedule November 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, sexy, sensitive and uncomplicated! Write More! G