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for Common Ground

by Kuragari75

schedule July 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i like so far.
you should throw vincent in there.
maybe as a threesome??
hmm.
i mean he did save all three of their asses at one point.
so yea.
think about it!!!
XD.
yea. i cant wait for more

Golden Kitsune~
person Shinosuke
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow. this is actually really good. i wanna see what happens next. update soon?
schedule May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
As sorry as I am that Rude died, it does make for an interesting premise! I look forward to seeing where you go with this story!
schedule May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello! Its been a while since I got back to this and Wooo! Glad to see it has updated! I like that you are giving it a good backstory and all. I cant wait to see the rest!
person Rina76
schedule January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh yay, you're back! Thanks for the lovely update. Nice to see Zack here, despensing advice (and scoldings) from the other side as usual. lol I loved the bit where Cloud is touching Reno's face. Repeatedly. XD Don't rush with the smut, hon. Sure, it's fun but I love the build-up to smut even more; the tension, the awareness, the slow attraction, the first kiss. That stuff just makes me melt like a marshmallow in a cup of hot chocolate! ^__^

You're doing a great job so far, can't wait for more!

schedule January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awww that is so cute! when is the smex gonna break the cuteness?
schedule November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*woot*

when does the smut coooome????? it always takes so loooong.....but i like it so far^^
person Rina76
schedule June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Reno losing it and crying is just....gah...*feels the pain* The emotion is definitely there. It's good that Cloud understands what it's like to lose somebody and can help him, though. I think these two characters interacting are rather interesting and I like how you're writing Cloud as not so much a sad, depressive heap but someone with a bit of spark and usefulness.

Good to see you updating!
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So far, this is awesome! I feel so bad for Reno- please, pretty please, update soon!
person helensdragon
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow ..... (hugs Rino to ample chest).... just cry it all out...*so ya I wont to read more I hope you update this soon.