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March 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! How is Larsa going to fix this? Will Penelo decide to return with Ashe after everything she just overheard? What a cliff hanger. :( I loved the merpeople part; I thought that was very original and a little romantic for them both to experience. Still, I'm shocked with how this chapter ended; everything was going so well….
This fic is so well written! I can really follow it easily and imagine the settings in my mind. Please keep up the wonderful work!
This fic is so well written! I can really follow it easily and imagine the settings in my mind. Please keep up the wonderful work!
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December 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I highly enjoyed reading this story! Will you be updating sometime soon? Please let me know if you do :)
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February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this pairing! And you've done wonders with it. This is an amazing story, please continue it I want to see more of this. There aren't enough happy ending Larsa and Penelo stories to go around. This is definitely top of the list now. So please please please write more?
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February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My my! It's not everyday that one would run into such a well written story as this! And that coming out of me is quite a feat, you see I'm the type who visits this website just to read the one-shot stories and just have a good time if you know what I mean.
This story fully captivated me and the lack of sex scenes didn't deter me from reading the 8 chapters. All the thought put into it and the details are wonderful.
I'm still wondering why Penelo claimed to have never ridden a chocobo before though. Was it just added to create more intimacy between Penelo and Larsa? Or do you consider Vaan to be the only one riding the chocobos in the game while everyone else mysteriously teleport to where ever he is when he dismounts?
Anyways, thanks for the good read. I'll be sure to give other fanfics a chance as I tend to skip stories that have more than one chapter.
This story fully captivated me and the lack of sex scenes didn't deter me from reading the 8 chapters. All the thought put into it and the details are wonderful.
I'm still wondering why Penelo claimed to have never ridden a chocobo before though. Was it just added to create more intimacy between Penelo and Larsa? Or do you consider Vaan to be the only one riding the chocobos in the game while everyone else mysteriously teleport to where ever he is when he dismounts?
Anyways, thanks for the good read. I'll be sure to give other fanfics a chance as I tend to skip stories that have more than one chapter.
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January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Le gasp!
It was wonderful! Everything I had hoped for.
Geez, I wish I was Penelo right now.
Oh well, I hope you right more soon!
Please?
It was wonderful! Everything I had hoped for.
Geez, I wish I was Penelo right now.
Oh well, I hope you right more soon!
Please?
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw, did you have to leave it there? How mean of you!
Please update soon. Larsa and Penelo are my favorite pairing and this story is wonderful.
More, please?
Pretty please?
Please update soon. Larsa and Penelo are my favorite pairing and this story is wonderful.
More, please?
Pretty please?