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November 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome .
Pretty straightforward, descriptions short.
However, every carefuly chosen word has its purpose, keeping the story interesting with the action instead of the characters.
Now I need to read more of this one. I really hope you will keep updating this story !
Pretty straightforward, descriptions short.
However, every carefuly chosen word has its purpose, keeping the story interesting with the action instead of the characters.
Now I need to read more of this one. I really hope you will keep updating this story !
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May 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say that I haven't read the latest chapter (yet! I will right after i type this off!), but I am the happiest person alive now that you've updated! I don't care how long a time there is in between updates, I will gladly wait for you to work on this story because it is honestly one of the most original and well-written ffvii stories in my honest opinion. Anyways, sorry for turning into a rabid fan... time to read! (And THANK YOU!)
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April 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Happy to see you're back darlin'. :)
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February 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This great! So wonderful ya know! You should continue this! :D Don't leave it hanging like this, I really love it! So please continue this -puppy eyes- :'3
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November 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhh~ Dx when will you update...,? :'( Please don't drop this.., Dx It's really good and it gets more and more exciting! OH please continue with the next chapter :( -inserts puppy eyes-
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August 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is my favourite story! I was so happy to see that you added a new chapter! After I saw your most recent review was yeeeaaars ago, I decided I simply had to make this account and let you know someone is still following this!
Zack is so darling. Honestly, he's just everything. His characterization is perfect. I'm hoping and praying no harm comes to him, the dear. It makes me sad that he has to die tragically in every story. I know it's canon, but come on! This is fanfiction! The poor things should be allowed a happy ending!
Everyone is characterized very well. They feel real, three-dimensional. Cloud is a bit uke for my taste, I'd like to see him come in to his own a bit more. I never saw Elena to be cold like you're portraying her, but I suppose it suits as she DOES work for Hojo. Reno intrigues me. I'm interested to see what decision he made. My gut tells me that he betrayed Zack, but would he really backstab his friend like that? It's a tough call!
Oh, please, please, please, pleeeaaase update again soon! I need to know what happens to these two.
Zack is so darling. Honestly, he's just everything. His characterization is perfect. I'm hoping and praying no harm comes to him, the dear. It makes me sad that he has to die tragically in every story. I know it's canon, but come on! This is fanfiction! The poor things should be allowed a happy ending!
Everyone is characterized very well. They feel real, three-dimensional. Cloud is a bit uke for my taste, I'd like to see him come in to his own a bit more. I never saw Elena to be cold like you're portraying her, but I suppose it suits as she DOES work for Hojo. Reno intrigues me. I'm interested to see what decision he made. My gut tells me that he betrayed Zack, but would he really backstab his friend like that? It's a tough call!
Oh, please, please, please, pleeeaaase update again soon! I need to know what happens to these two.
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December 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a wonderfull picture you paint,Zack as a samurai is just drool worthy and cloud is just so cute (I just want to hug him). But bad Hojo no touching Cloud he's Zack's. Hope you update soon.
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September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I love this fic!
One of my faves. I love the whole AU Edo period of Japan. And Zack as a samurai is sexy~
Poor Cloudy is always the less hot version of him, hee. But you do portray him well and he makes such a cute/innocent uke. Poor kid though is the most prized virgin ass around.
Anyway, can't wait for more! x]
One of my faves. I love the whole AU Edo period of Japan. And Zack as a samurai is sexy~
Poor Cloudy is always the less hot version of him, hee. But you do portray him well and he makes such a cute/innocent uke. Poor kid though is the most prized virgin ass around.
Anyway, can't wait for more! x]
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July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love love love love love this story. Keep up the good work! *waits patiently for a update*
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June 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
Just wanted to let you know that this is a great story and a really really great idea! Please upload soon!!!! :)
Just wanted to let you know that this is a great story and a really really great idea! Please upload soon!!!! :)