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person Night XIV
schedule October 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Don't stop there. I'm very interested in reading what happens next. I really hope that Yazoo-kun is okay. Can't help but wonder what Sehpy did to him. By the way, I really love how dark and evil Sephiroth is in this. :D
person Elenna
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I took so long. I don't think it should be sephiroth because Sephiroth is more of a brotherly figure to all of them rather than a fatherly figure, mostly because all four of them call Jenova 'Mother.' And the fic summary says 'foster father' so who are their real parents?

And I suppose with it being Sephiroth, you sort of see it coming (before the pairing was listed)

But being the AU story it is, all is as well as it can be. It is still well written.
schedule March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey sorry I did review your last chapter -had internet isusses.
Anyway, You really know how to keep people guess and I love every
second of it, do hope you continue to write more this awsome fic.
person mayleaf
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What am amazing, well-written story! Your characterizations are very well-thought out and believable, and the plot is a real nail-biter, edge-of-your-seat thriller! A fantastic talent you have there! I can't wait to read more!
person Ringwen
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I'm still waiting patiently for some Seph/Yaz action.. Dirty as I am.. <.<;;
I really do like the angst/drama you put into this fic, and also that you manage some humor fro time to time! Very good indeed! ^.^
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That's an amazing novel! The suspense, the drama, everything it's just perfect!
Really loved it and can't wait for more!
person Ringwen
schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, still as interesting as ever! I can't wait to read what sadistic ol' Seph has done to Yazoo..! XD Hopefully it will be something very naughty..and hot! 8D
person Elenna
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Much dissapointment. I knew it was gonna be him....but i didn't think he should.....
(personaly I think Hojo is a better choice, or even Rufus if you wanted someone 'pretty')
But, your story. Nuthin' I can do. Thanks for updating.
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAHHHH!!! How dare you stop there!! *Is going insane* Please hurry with next chapter, I love how you keep them in character even though they're young *sighs* man, that was intense I can't wait to read more.
person Elenna
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAHHHH!!!!!! NOOOOO!!! CLIFFHANGEEER!! I hate you!

(lol not really. I love the story though! wonder who the 'father' is......)