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schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Update this please, you cut off right at the good part - the Penelo gangbang.

If its a review you want, I enjoy the gangbang scenes in your stories - they do well at achieving their purpose. I'm eagerly waiting an update to Jewels of the Skysea.
person Streti
schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks, Dick and Joe. Also, I prefer comments over praise. What would that purpose be, Joe?
person Dick Dickman
schedule April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Streti, I'm so glad you kept this story going, it's one of my favorites. You're a great author, and your work is some of the best on the site.
person Streti
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh sod off. They've recently changed their terms and now disclaimers that were fine before aren't anymore. And when this story is obviously not too liked, why should I bother? Maybe it's better gone, I'm sick of these leechers.
person Streti
schedule February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh phooey. Maybe I'll just delete the whole fucking thing.
person DcA
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would enjoy reading more of this story.
person Anon
schedule December 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn, this story is good so far! NEED MORE!!

can you write some more ff 12 stories? much appreciated if you can
person jimbob1112
schedule December 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aw c'mon more chapters please!!!??? I love your stories and you're finally doing final fantasy 12
schedule December 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad fic, but I would'nt say that Fran's complexion is dark enough to describe her as ebony. Look forward to future chapters.