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for Girls Night In

by kanzen

person kanzen
schedule December 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Fortunately I didn't have much direction with this story initially, I just wanted to cover the date scene and deal with the people who didn't go on the date. I knew ahead of time that a sizeable chunk of the FF7 audience are what coined the term fanboy, those tend to be the most vocal. The review topic will stay up for anyone who wants to see what not to say to an author to keep them writing.

I covered what I cared about, the FF7 crowd is too stuck up for my tastes. This whole review is the official ending to this story, no more will be posted.
person annoyed
schedule August 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
you can say cock and cunt but you cant say fuck or bitch?
person SpaceOddity
schedule December 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice one so far. I especially liked the Aeris and Cloud chapter and would really like to see more of just those two.
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
damn hot story i like to read the bigger orgy scene with aeris fucked by other guys or cloud fuck tifa or else maybe DP or TP,

if you please
person Streti
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice hot story, especially liked the first chapter with Red totally covering Tifa and the second chapter with Aerith and Cloud's exhibitionism in the gondola. Barret's dialogue was amusing. I'd like to see more FFXII Revenant Wings stories and your style would be great for that. Final Fantasy IV also.
person Anon
schedule December 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great latest addition! keep up the good work
person Anon
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great pairing! Hope you continue it with more Barret x any FF girl he never gets enough love