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for Smothered in Love

by TJChaos

person Xagzan
schedule March 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You. Must. Write. More. (please?)

Especially stories like this. It was quite entertaining, and not just cause of the erotic stuff.
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome! One of the all-out funniest fics I've read on this site, a classic satire of spermbath fics, the FF summons, Rydia's attire, and FF fandom's absurd obsession with wanking her. You really have a gift for this. The way Sperma talks to Rydia came out very natural, even when she's being openly satirical. I just had to laugh when the jets started coming at her. Even the title "Smothered in Love", looked at from the context of the story, is funny.

By the way: I haven't posted it yet, but by very freaky coincidence, chapter 2 of my FF4 fic has a brief scene that is similar to the ending of this story. Just letting you know I had this scene completely written before I read your fic, i.e. I didn't rip you off. (Would be pretty stupid of me to plagiarize in the same fandom, anyway... It makes me have to directly compete with your fic for readers.)
person Streti
schedule December 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fuuuuck yes! You are now my favorite writer! Rydia is indeed in need of much love, disgusting as it may be. Great humor and love her dialogue style. Wonder what would happen if Rydia used Tozoa on Rosa in the real world? Looking forward to seeing more writings from you!