schedule
April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, thanks for the reviews, guys! I guess I spoke too soon in my chapter 2 Author's notes, LOL. I much appreciate all the comments, both positive and critical.
And Streti, I swear, I had the sperm-drowning scene totally planned out(and partially written) before Empire of Dirt's "Smothered in Love" came out. When I read that story... well, first of all I laughed, because it's a good funny story... but I couldn't believe my bad luck. I've never seen a sperm-drowning scene ever before, and then one by another author comes out just as I'm writing mine, in the exact same small AFF.net category! I almost decided to cut that scene, but I think mine is different enough from Empire of Dirt's that it was worth keeping.
And Streti, I swear, I had the sperm-drowning scene totally planned out(and partially written) before Empire of Dirt's "Smothered in Love" came out. When I read that story... well, first of all I laughed, because it's a good funny story... but I couldn't believe my bad luck. I've never seen a sperm-drowning scene ever before, and then one by another author comes out just as I'm writing mine, in the exact same small AFF.net category! I almost decided to cut that scene, but I think mine is different enough from Empire of Dirt's that it was worth keeping.
schedule
April 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like it. I'm always up for reading some wincest.
Nice job.
Nice job.
schedule
February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, now. The setting is somewhat unexpected, and I do wonder if you're making a jab at Porom's dress in The After. There is some discrepancy between the sly humor and Palom's distress in the end of the first chapter.
However, the beginning of the second chapter is quite surprising, and humorous despite the different kind of a distress for Palom, when it turns out to be a dream. The second chapter wraps up nicely with the interview and the sex scene, and Porom's gruff ending comment alleviates some of his previous asinine nature.
Also, now we have fics for both Porom and Rydia (from Empire of Dirt) getting drowned in cum. Next up: Rosa?
Winky Dinky? A weird sense of humor, but I appreciate the effort.
However, the beginning of the second chapter is quite surprising, and humorous despite the different kind of a distress for Palom, when it turns out to be a dream. The second chapter wraps up nicely with the interview and the sex scene, and Porom's gruff ending comment alleviates some of his previous asinine nature.
Also, now we have fics for both Porom and Rydia (from Empire of Dirt) getting drowned in cum. Next up: Rosa?
Winky Dinky? A weird sense of humor, but I appreciate the effort.
schedule
January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
People can be jerks and not actually give you a response after reading.
I didn't read the story. It's nothing against your writing, I just don't care about the twins very much and Porom's complete make-over in The After all the way to giving her pink hair (lolwut) screamed "we made Porom hot now, please buy our game." That and I consider The After to be a non-canonical fanwank because of how it does nothing but regurgitate cliche fanfic ideas and plaster the popular characters all over the place.
I did want to see your author's notes though. I don't know why, I simply felt compelled to do so.
I didn't read the story. It's nothing against your writing, I just don't care about the twins very much and Porom's complete make-over in The After all the way to giving her pink hair (lolwut) screamed "we made Porom hot now, please buy our game." That and I consider The After to be a non-canonical fanwank because of how it does nothing but regurgitate cliche fanfic ideas and plaster the popular characters all over the place.
I did want to see your author's notes though. I don't know why, I simply felt compelled to do so.
schedule
January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, it's a shame about Streti not leaving a review, but it's more of a shame that Palom decided to be such a cocktease and only give Parom the one time.
Oh well though. This is somewhat discouraging, however, as if the lack of hits on this is any indicator of how my Cecil/Rosa fic will come though, I'm not gonna be happy.
Thanks though, for showing love to one of the least written games of the series, and in my opinion, the best of them all.
Always, Anonelbe
Oh well though. This is somewhat discouraging, however, as if the lack of hits on this is any indicator of how my Cecil/Rosa fic will come though, I'm not gonna be happy.
Thanks though, for showing love to one of the least written games of the series, and in my opinion, the best of them all.
Always, Anonelbe
schedule
January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The sad truth is that when it comes to FF4, most people only care about Rydia or Cecil x Kain, in that order. You can write the best fic ever, but if it's not about one of those two, it won't get much notice.
I can say I'd definitely read the Cecil and Rosa story. I'd also read Barbariccia, as well as Izayoi and/or Ursula from The After (two characters that the people working on the game completely ditched doing anything with, but had a lot of nice potential). I likely won't read anything Rydia because I'm sick of seeing her everywhere. I think I'd read an Anna story too, or hell even Yang's Wife or Cecilia (mother of Cecil).
Anyway, sorry for adding another non-review, The Pairing Guy, but I wanted to say that to Anonelbe.
I can say I'd definitely read the Cecil and Rosa story. I'd also read Barbariccia, as well as Izayoi and/or Ursula from The After (two characters that the people working on the game completely ditched doing anything with, but had a lot of nice potential). I likely won't read anything Rydia because I'm sick of seeing her everywhere. I think I'd read an Anna story too, or hell even Yang's Wife or Cecilia (mother of Cecil).
Anyway, sorry for adding another non-review, The Pairing Guy, but I wanted to say that to Anonelbe.