rate_review Reviews

The chapters were overly short, but that didnt take away from an amazingly well written story. And if its your first fic I think you passed with flying colors, I only hope I do so well.

o.O.... *twitches* Must refrain from maiming Chaos.... actually I think that he's misunderstood. Yes he's a demon and sadistic as they come but really could you claim you wouldn't be the same way if some sadistic bastard ripped you from your home and shoved you into someone elses body with no way to get home? Yea he wants to destroy Vincent... at least most of the time... but he's a prisioner in there. He's seen as a beast with no morals but think about it seriously for a bit, he's only unbalanced because there is no Order. He is angry yes, hell he'd have to be stupid not to be, he's not allowed to be himself and his strength is used by Vincent (don't think i'm bashing Vinny here because i'm actually a big vincent fan) yet vincent keeps him trapped instead of giving him a little more freedom.
Now I probably sound insane but if you think about it it makes perfect sense. Anyways now that I've ranted a bit I want to tell you to keep up the good work and that i'll look forward to your next chapter.

i ignored my bf to read all of this in one night lol. cant wait to read more chapters

Vin, be a man take down that asshole Chaos

I personally can't wait to see what happens, somehow I don't see Chaos going down without a fight:)

Oh Cloud, run for your life:)

GOD!!! Chaos is a fucking ASS!
Why can't Cloud and Vin have some alone time or mister "bitch-in-the-head" could be nice
and only be kinda half in control and be gentle.

GAHHHH!!!!!!

Chaos, you bastard...may Valentine slay you^_^

this is totally addictive, Valentine please save our little Cloud from nasty Chaos:)

Please update soon, I need to know how Vincent & Cloud can ever be together as long as Chaos is around!