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April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you're a great writer. The characters are so in character. :)
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, terrific couple of chapters! Okay, so don't wear yourself out trying to do a Yazoo shower scene because the one you did - even though only a fantasy - was still hot enough for me! (not that I will ever say no to reading a Yazoo shower scene but if you don't have the time to do it, it's perfectly fine!) Rufus has a great imagination, yes? I love the erotic details you put in and the way you describe what the more dominant male sees from his point of view. It was a shock going from Rufus mentally calling Yazoo a needy little bitch and coming all over his own clothes, to seeing how things /really/ were in that bathroom, and the final image of a tortured Yazoo crouched on the floor in despair nearly broke my heart. You always write Yazoo's pain so perfectly; I can really feel it. :(
Amazing twist in the second update! Didn't see that coming and it surprised the hell out of me. I bet Yaz is surprised too but this is a good thing. Finally, someone he can relate to, someone who knows what he's going through. Also found it amusing how Rufus just waltzes into the room without knocking as if he owns it. Oh, right. He DOES. lol Arrogant though he is, I can see him becoming a very good friend of Yazoo's and heaven knows, that's what Yaz needs right now!
Still feel bad for Vincent too. Man, all those yummy guys in the priesthood? I'd almost join up Mother's stupid religion just to look at them everyday. ^__^
Nice job as always, honey.
Amazing twist in the second update! Didn't see that coming and it surprised the hell out of me. I bet Yaz is surprised too but this is a good thing. Finally, someone he can relate to, someone who knows what he's going through. Also found it amusing how Rufus just waltzes into the room without knocking as if he owns it. Oh, right. He DOES. lol Arrogant though he is, I can see him becoming a very good friend of Yazoo's and heaven knows, that's what Yaz needs right now!
Still feel bad for Vincent too. Man, all those yummy guys in the priesthood? I'd almost join up Mother's stupid religion just to look at them everyday. ^__^
Nice job as always, honey.
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April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my Vincent is such a liar... Can't wait to see where this is going. Oh and enjoy mine. I saw the movie two days ago and wow out this came!
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April 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol. well it's dyed red now. xDD
Ohh. What a twist. I never would've thought that Rufus would've come from a background like that.
But it actually makes a lot of sense for your Rufus and your story. And explains why Rufus is so extreme and such a bastard. xDD
Ohh. What a twist. I never would've thought that Rufus would've come from a background like that.
But it actually makes a lot of sense for your Rufus and your story. And explains why Rufus is so extreme and such a bastard. xDD
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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Idk. I may dye it red.
I keep putting it off just because red is sort of a high-maintanence color...
But I recently found a red dye that doesn't fade to pink and actually lasts a decent amount of time... so I may do it. xDD So I can look like Reno.
I'm actually sort of relieved that it was just a fantasy. Hahah. I would've been so jealous for poor Vinny if Rufus had had his way with sweet little Yaz so easily. xDD
I keep putting it off just because red is sort of a high-maintanence color...
But I recently found a red dye that doesn't fade to pink and actually lasts a decent amount of time... so I may do it. xDD So I can look like Reno.
I'm actually sort of relieved that it was just a fantasy. Hahah. I would've been so jealous for poor Vinny if Rufus had had his way with sweet little Yaz so easily. xDD
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March 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Naugthy Rufus INDEED! O.O Oh ho ho how I wish he'll actually do all those things to Yazoo! Or that someone'll do it at least! XD
Hmm.. We'll in my mind (dirty and perverted as it is) Sephiroth is probably the only one who could put some fear and respect in Yazoo..
Usually Yazoo is just kind of arrogant, cold, somewhat bitchy (don't get me wrong, you know I love him) and always looking bored.
I wonder what Sephiroth would think if Yazoo actually tried to use those moods with him. I see Sephiroth someone who doesn't demand obedience, he expects it. Does Yazoo know this? ^.~ Eeeh, just playing with some thoughts. Think it's something you can use? <.<;; Mail me if you'd like to discuss it. ^_^
Hmm.. We'll in my mind (dirty and perverted as it is) Sephiroth is probably the only one who could put some fear and respect in Yazoo..
Usually Yazoo is just kind of arrogant, cold, somewhat bitchy (don't get me wrong, you know I love him) and always looking bored.
I wonder what Sephiroth would think if Yazoo actually tried to use those moods with him. I see Sephiroth someone who doesn't demand obedience, he expects it. Does Yazoo know this? ^.~ Eeeh, just playing with some thoughts. Think it's something you can use? <.<;; Mail me if you'd like to discuss it. ^_^
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, you did a little Rufus/Yazoo.I enjoyed that. Makes my aching body feel much better. Melbourne is famous for it's trams but it ain't fun being hit by one, I'm all bruised. Hope to read more soon,thank you
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Wow, Yaz said some really mean things to Vincent. Poor Vince!
Heh, Rufus is such a little perv, I love it. And the secretary acting unconcerned, like this sort of thing happens all the time. lol
Great description of the shower 'room' with the glass screen. I want one of those! Of course, you know you're gonna have to write a Yazoo-alone-in-the-shower scene, right? *imagines his gorgeous body all wet and naked and soapy...*
Hell yeah! Yazoo would make a FANTASTIC model. I always thought that. And I'd buy anything he was advertising, even if it was like, milkshakes or lawnmowers or something. ;) You know what would be totally awesome? If he had his own brand of hair care products. I can just see his logo now - "Use Yazoo Shampoo. Keeps the shine in your silver!" Haha...
*gasp* Zack/Yazoo? Confessional box? Yes, please! *gives big baby seal eyes*
I love you. ^__^
Heh, Rufus is such a little perv, I love it. And the secretary acting unconcerned, like this sort of thing happens all the time. lol
Great description of the shower 'room' with the glass screen. I want one of those! Of course, you know you're gonna have to write a Yazoo-alone-in-the-shower scene, right? *imagines his gorgeous body all wet and naked and soapy...*
Hell yeah! Yazoo would make a FANTASTIC model. I always thought that. And I'd buy anything he was advertising, even if it was like, milkshakes or lawnmowers or something. ;) You know what would be totally awesome? If he had his own brand of hair care products. I can just see his logo now - "Use Yazoo Shampoo. Keeps the shine in your silver!" Haha...
*gasp* Zack/Yazoo? Confessional box? Yes, please! *gives big baby seal eyes*
I love you. ^__^
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March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow ... poor Rufus...so wrapped my the beauty prude(?) Yazoo...
I love it. You really should do more smut cause you really have an elegant style for kinky, so sensual, hot and dirty at same time.
Awaiting anxiously for the next chapter.
hugs from brasil
I love it. You really should do more smut cause you really have an elegant style for kinky, so sensual, hot and dirty at same time.
Awaiting anxiously for the next chapter.
hugs from brasil
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March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol!!! awww Rufus is a little schemer! Totally thought that bit where he downloaded the camvid was hilarious, I really hope you update soon!