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for A wedding

by schwaerze

person fyrbyrd
schedule February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow and I thought the weather was hot last week.... More!!!!!
person Ringwen
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
8D I think I saw a naked Kadaj!! XD ..I'd rather it be Yazoo but.. So, you can only play blue ray on PS3, or what? T.T

Oh...oooooh... I can't wait to see what Sephiroth has to say about his baby brother loosing his virginity to ol' Vince... I am getting the feeling that Yazoo can expect punishment from his big bro, hm? <.<;; And Vincent too for that matter.. Wonderful! Write on! ^.^
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG ! It is fantastic! Everything, the feelings, the kinky hot sex... You're good! Very good indeed and still elegant!
Thank you
person fyrbyrd
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, more, more, more, please. (Begging here!!!) Hot and heavy Yazzie and Vinnie......
person Rina76
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Kinky. And yummy. The undressing-Yazoo-against-the-wall part...possibly one of the hottest scenes I've read from you. I'm not usually big on crossdressing but you make the womens' clothes work on him. Nobody else could get away with it but he can. No wonder Vincent can't stop himself. Phew. *is a little flushed* Boy, Yaz must be completely smashed to be so easy. But we love easy Yaz. Mm hm. Yes, we do. ^__^

(I keep expecting Reno to burst in with the camera any minute now. XD)

Still fun!
person Ringwen
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HOT DAMN!! 8D Don't keep us waiting, 'tis torture! XD
person crayonbox
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I wish I was a better artist. I would've drawn the scene wih Vincent undressing Yazoo for you, because the mental images is screaming to be put on paper. (I draw stickfigures...doesn't really do the scene justice *mourns* :'( )
This story absolutely rocks my socks. I lol'd so hard at the religion-thingie. You really thought that one over didn't you? All Jenova signs are there, including even the little wing. *bows at ur awesomness*
You have Reno in a nutshell. He's wonderfully evil (filming Yazoo in drag and all) and I do hope his part will be up next, as soon as Vince is done with Yaz of course. Vin/Yaz Rawr!!! ;) X3.
Poor, poor Aerith... although the pairing (Yaz/Aerith) makes me squick, I feel kind of bad for her.
And Sephiroth...how far will that blind eye of yours go, before you find out and give in as well... I mean, he will right?...eventually...?
All in all, this is a wonderfully delicious sinful fic. Please continue writing. :D
person Ringwen
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo! Looks promising! 8D Please write more! ^.^
person fyrbyrd
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well my friend, yet another gem. I am definitely looking forward to seeing how this one comes out. And now I have my new computer up and running and one story under my belt I hope to get back to mine soon...promise.
person Rina76
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh joy, more stupid religion. *groans* And what? Yaz is marrying WHO? No! No, no! *is horrified* Ah well, at least a stag night is a great excuse for straight-laced young men to get trashed and do very, very bad things. With each other. Hopefully. ;)

Reno is...well...being very typically Reno. I'm lovin' him so far! He's gonna be the instigator of all the badness and wickedness to come. I can tell that already. XD

And you have a thing for dressing Yazoo like that, huh? Poor Yaz. I'm sure he'd feel very degraded. But uh...why's he still wearing it? There's a good question. Hmm. Let's blame Reno. Yeah. It's all his fault. Like I said: instigator.

Fabulously frothy, frivolous and fun fic! (try saying that three times in a row. lol) Makes a delightful change from your other, more angsty and sometimes heavier one. I'll be keeping up with this!