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Lovely, I agree with what you said, Sephiroth is really one of best villians in the final fantasy saga although i admit i like both sides of him before and after his insanity in crisis core and onwards.
Anyway this fic is really well done, it gets his true character out so please continue i really want to read good work such as your XD.

I have to say that this is one of the few original character stories that I actually like and Akina is not a sue... She doesn't radiate lubby-duuby feelings and make Sephiroth realize she's his won twu wub... *shudders and vomits in a corner at that thought before continuing with the review* She's realistic, and well thought out much like this story.

And kudos for not making Sephiroth some whiny emo, romantic douche monkey. You kept his twisted, dark nature and for that I commend you. And I would seriously love to see a second chapter.

OMG. That was the most epic first person fanfiction I have EVER read. I've read great stories like this before, but this piece takes amazing skill, and you have it. I'll have to say Sephiroth is indeed in his true character this time, and I love it to the fullest. I always pictured Sephiroth to be rough and abusive... and I love it! Great work, keep it up! I'd love to see another chapter of this!

I know what you mean, Sephiroth in the game is an evil, insane bastard. Before that, however, he was relatively nicer (and not insande). Still, I do prefer it when he is darker and not full of gooey sweet feeling (lol).

Love this, I completely agree with how most authors portray Sephiroth, it is a major annoyance. Sephiroth is a true baddies villain, I could never understand why a villain just can't be evil for the hell of it.

Never understood why authors always want to take such deliciously evil badass characters (i.e. Sephiroth, Joker, Itachi, Voldemort) and turn them into wrist cutting, criers of all things sentimental, misunderstood, lovers of all things fluffy, soft, cuddly and adorable (all in privet and only with their Mary Sues ((i.e. authors themselves)) of course).

I mean really, what the hell man, we love these characters because their rough, coarse, badass and evil with no-one equal to them. Most authors take wonderful, epic, well established character and turn them into SpongeBob like Gary Stu's that are barely recognizable and that is so wrong, but it's either take those horribly written fics or read a yoai story, because as we all know every male in FF7 is gay, and only want eachother (cue sarcasm, I mean really, Cloud/Sephiroth, Sephiroth/Vincent ((always felt Vinny was his father))Cloud/Reno, TSHM amongst themselves, where do these concepts come from....oh yeah teenybopper fangirls) and since slash ain't my thing, corny OFCs/Sephiroth and the surprisingly rare, well rounded Cloti or even rarer Fack fics is what I've been reading.

So kudos to you, I tip my hat, this was a wonderful start to what I feel can be a really good fic, your Sephiroth is in character, very true to form and recognizable to what we know, and your OFC is believable and realistic in her responses.

Thank you, thank you, thank you for not making her Sarah Raven Jessica Kelly SliverStone MoonChild, with the most beautiful long wavy silver hair and the most heart-stopping, see into your soul violet eyes, with a tear inspiring smile, unmatchable intelligence, unbeatable swordsmanship, with a abusive father, a bother who raped her, a friend who betrayed her, a pet who died, and Tifa, Aerith and Yuffie being mean and unmistakably super jealous of her and her awesomeness and oh yeah she's Cloud's sister (or was that Zack/Genesis), his twin.

I apologize for such a long as rant,but the quality or fanfics in so many fandoms has dramatically fallen so low lately, many fandoms have been over taken by ill equip, un-informed fan-girls and it shows. This fic has alot of potential and I can't wait to 'see' where you take this. Please hurry Back with more

;D This, I must say, is very well done. I'm not much for the oc's with Sephiroth type, but I can see why you decided on it. I suppose that everyone has their quirks and what attracts them to certain story types; whether it be a sadistic or mushy Sephiroth. {Personally in my opinion, as long as the story is well written and makes sense I'm up for anything.) Any how, it would be nice to see this story expanded upon; even if it was just another chapter or two. I'd request to add one myself, but the concept is not mine and therefore I would know not what to do with it. ♥ Great stuff either way. ~Lamica