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Noooo...this cannot be the end.

 

But still, great story, loved it and the ending, good job =D

Thanks for updating, and so glad you didn't forget about us readers! Very curious to see how things progress.

Hi Rina! Thank you once again for updating this story. I have to admit that I was a tad bit scared of the pregnancy smut warning you had at the beginning but I have to say that it wasn't bad at all and still extremely enjoyable. I loved the way that Kate explains more about what is happening to her during the pregnancy and also how she assures him that sex while being pregnant is possible and ok. It's too adorable how interested he is in her physical changes and I find it to be extremely realistic to his character. I do have a deep love for Yazoo and Kate's friendly relationship. The way they interact with each other is so refreshing and definitely needed. It's almost like Yazoo is Kate's voice of reason and reassurance when she has such craptastic but extremely hilarious encounters with Kadaj. Speaking of Kadaj, I love him! Even though he gives Kate such a hard time he makes the whole situation light and fun with his embarrassing comments. Also, combined with the way Kate reacts, it's just so priceless!

Thank you so much for updating so quickly! I absolutely loved this chapter, mostly because it shows more silent interactions and more depth into Cate's inner-most thoughts about the boys. I laughed hard when Cate ogled Kadaj and realized what she was doing. Absolutely hilarious! I tend to never review twice on the same story or wait for updates on a fanfiction, but this story will be one that I continuously review on and religiously wait for updates. This, by far, is the best story I've read in a long time and I thank you so much for bringing it into existence.

I just wanted to let you know that I read and fell in love with your story!! I have looked for fanfiction about Loz being in relationships and I have to say that yours is the best I've read so far. Please continue with this story! I love it way to much and would be heartbroken if it ends now.

Again this was such a great chapter! You described Loz' room exactly how I would have imagined it to be - empty chips bags, magazines (no porn though? XD) and trash metal CDs, yay! He's totally a trash metal guy XD It is a good thing he changed his sheets for Cate, though I must say that I can 6 weeks without changing them too, becuase I forget....... don't tell anyone >___< Anyways, now I really wonder how the other two's rooms look! I could imagine that Kadaj is either really chaotic or very orderly (since he is a bit of a control freak) or maybe it is very ordinary? Since Yazoo seems to have such a sense for designing stuff and arranging it his room must look mind-blowing XD I loved that he did most of the designing btw, it seems fitting!

Now I have to admit that I squirmed a bit at the 'lovey-dovey-confessionmaking' bit... It's not because it wasn't well written, but I am not good with those kind of things XD It had to happen of course, they need to get closer as this is a romance story as well and I am glad that they talked so openly and that they have respect for each other and try to work something out! At times I find it a bit hard to believe that Loz had had only bad experiences, because even though he might not be as popular as Yazoo and Kadaj he is by no means ugly or unattractive. I guess the world he lives in is really harsh.

I am curious to read what Cate is saying in her sleep! It seems that she has a direct line to Jenova or Sephiroth, poor thing XDDD That will be one hell of a ride! Cate's talk with Yazoo was interesting too; I do not think she needs to fear him and I am glad he has that affectionate side as well but I cannot help but wonder if he cares for her as a person at all. Granted, he met her only two times and knows next to nothing about her character, so it seems that the only reason he tolerates her is because she was nice to Loz and now carries his brother's baby. I think that is a very realistic portrayal, actually. It would be strange to think that either of them (except for Loz of course because for him it kind of was love at first sight XD) would find her to be something 'special' or exceptional. She is just a girl and she will have to prove herself to them, I guess, and I am certain she will ;)

Thank you for this wonderful chapter and I cannot wait to see if Cate will find out who it is that fucked Kadaj XDDD *huggles and kisses*

I really like the moments between Cate and Loz, and Cate and Yazoo. They're really sweet.

Oh that was a BRILLIANT chapter!!! I love that this isn't all about how ungodly hot Loz is ans sex sex sex. I really like that Cate actually cares about getting to know him. And your Yazoo is amazing, also.I think you've kept them ALL in character perfectly. Can't wait for the next one!!

greaaat story! i love it and i can't wait for more!

I just read your story and I'm so excited to read the rest. It's really well written. Mary Sues are acceptable as long as they are well written and your character is well written.