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WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!! New chapter! And you were really fast with the update this time! But now things are progressing and the built up is over, so it might be easier to write? Anyways, I enjoyed it to the last letter :DThere were so many mixed emotions and you blend them perfectly into a vivid, touching mix! Yazoo, who doesn´´t normally speak that much was so well down, with how he speaks quietly, and is so calm and collected despite the content of his story, which was really heart-wrenching! But I guess over time he became jaded? I think maybe all of them had to emotionally distance themselves from their past a bit, to not go crazy... I felt very much for Loz, poor thing! He is so sensitive and to think that he had to kill his own brothers is so sad. But they really were only kids just then, and given their background and all it was, from their POV, a merciful decision... I loved also that Yazoo and Loz do dirty jokes in their heads XDDDD Haha, I´´d sooooo love to know what Yazoo was thinking!

I feel for Cate as well. It must be tough and dizzying to get all that information, but she handled it well, though sometimes she was almost painfully blunt in her summing things up XD Hilarious! And yeah, taking care of a super baby doesn´´t sound so thrilling... Loz won´´t be much of a big help, the softie. But maybe Kadaj and Yazoo can help out or so?

Besides, I also thought that the way you portrayed what had happened with Sephiroth and such was fairly accurate. You didn´t go much into detail but you didn´´t have to anyways. I also think that it is believable that Cate didn´´t notice much of the commotion; the world was in turmoil then and everyone just tried to save themselves and Shinra tried to keep information away from the public too.

Okay, I will stop here XD It was a wonderful addition as always and I can´´t wait to see what will happen next! Must know if Kadaj is still sulking XDDD *kisses and huggles*

Bu-bu-bu-bu-but! Don't leave it there! PLEASE update?! I absolutely ADORE this. And in my opinion, you kept the characters...oddly...in character. I LOVE this, and I really REALLY hope to see more of this soon. I have been DYING for a good Loz story. No one writes them, so, BRAVO!!!!


Could you possibly email me when you update? Maybe? Please? *Puppy dog eyes*

guni_tatsuhiko@yahoo.com

P.S. That was some of the hottest smut I have EVER read. EVER. *Whispers dramatically* Ever...

Omg.... I can't believe I only read this now!
Okay. I'm sorry for the late review, but hey, better late than never, right?
I like how the latest chapter went, oh hells yes.
The soft start, and then the tension and then kaa-BOOM. Full on violent fighting.
I guess that must have traumatised Cate, but I guess she would have to see it eventually.
Seeing and hearing about it is different.
How does she see Loz now?
Will she even want to go back to him after witnessing first hand what he and his brothers are perfectly capable of?
She has his number, but she didn't give loz hers, did she?
So I am guessing Cate will have to make the call back???
So many questions... You HAVE to update soon, please!
It's so enjoyable to read this and I want more! Soon!



SilentDoll

oh.my.gawd. Loz.... yummeh yummeh yummeh loz.... finally getting his much needed love. i snickered a little at the rhino comment but could totally see it. cate... she's... she could be you or me. she's not the picture of perfection that too many OFCs are. now. you best be updating soon or i'm kidnapping Loz and not letting you oggle him anymore O.o

Wait.
What is this....
You FINALLY updated? =D
Yay!!!!!
-Goes off to read-
Pardon me if I can't review properly.
I'm kinda really busy >_<

Crap, what an ending for this chapter! I wonder how Cate will receive Loz now, with what she's seen him doing. Please post more soon! I love this!

ch8

Yes! Loz finally gets laid! It was a pretty funny start but it gets intense soon. I'll be waiting for your next update!

Oh dear god, FINALLY!
The long awaited smutty chappie where Loz gets to screw Cate into HappyLand is up!
-cheers and sends you a truck of chocolate-
Oh yes, I lub teh Candy and Chocos =D
-steals more from L as Yazoo seduces him-
What IS L doing in the FFVII( AU ) Universe, anyway?
Oh yeah, and sorry for the late review, again >_>
-sends you another truck of candy and sweets and chocolates-
I hope this makes up for it! ^-^

Okay now, on to the review =D

Ah, I just love the moment where Kadaj is trying to glare daggers/ swords at Cate, but she merely reponds unaffected with a smile and a Eff you finger =D I like how she's just unafraid of Kadaj and is not some meek and submissive OC you see all over the place =D

I don't know if I have told you this, but I love your OC for how human and real she is. While other people have characters made out of words and paragraphs, I feel that your OC is so well thought out that she isn't just a bunch of words; the words fleshes her right out and she feels real =D Congrats for getting my approval and attention- I'm a very picky reader >_>

Oh, and hells yes, I loved the... hot part of the chapter, and the thought of Loz apologising for his Great Weapon just made me want to laugh and the pat him before giving him a hug. Poor guy does need Cate to get him to see himself in a whole new, brighter light. Either that, or clean to mirror in which Loz had been looking at himself all this time. Loz needs lotsa Luvin' =D (-Is stating the obvious- OTZ)


Loz backing Cate into the wall was hot, hot ,hot -pants in wanton want- Ahem ;)

What I liked most about The Scene was the mixture of raw fucking and romance, impatience and patience. My perfect cup of cu- tea =D

Okay, as you can tell, I'm bad at giving reviews, but I swear I tried my best for this. You deserve my effort for such a great,extra-long chappie to which you worked extra-hard at =D

Silent Doll

Oh, you think it was Kadaj on the other end of the line when Loz got that call in the church? Hm, I can imagine that it could be Yazoo as well, and I hoped ACC would enlighten me, but well... We´ll never know.

Now on to the long awaited new chapter:

Hahaha, naiv little Loz *shows him 'protection'-thingy* I had expected him to go to Yazoo for the condom though, he seemed reasonable enough to me to have one and to not bother Loz with a lecture... But Lozzy probably didn´t want to disturb him^^

Gaaaaah, the Yazoo/L scene almost did it for me already (can´t I bribe you in doing a full smut scene? *puppy eyes*) XDDD

Heh, Reno plays with fire. Again. He can´t seem to leave it alone, I love that about him ;)

Ah, interesting that Loz is being offended by being called queer. He does know that his brothers are gay/bi, does he? Does he think that´s not right, is he even disgusted by their relationship?

Hm, Cate gets bold already, claiming to be the owner of that 'dog'^^ But I guess Loz doesn´t mind anyway, he seems to have fallen for her completely already.(I think it´s okay here, since Loz seems to be that character that can be very obedient once he trusts someone and you manage to not drift into the Mary-Sue trap. Keep a close eye on that so you won´t accidently slip into it ;))

(Now I have a question: is this pre-, post- or AU AC?)

Gah, I never thought I´d say that but the hetero smut was sooooo hawt XDDD I cae to a point where I found hetero parings boring, but you convinced me otherwise *bows*

happy-gasm- what a word :D

Loz apologizin for being so big almost had me rolling on the floor! Poor (lucky) guy...

Again, I am speechless and you certainly proved to me that it wasn´t boring at all!!! Thank you!

Yay!!! An UPDATE!!!!

Finally!!!

-reads-


H-h-hold up!

Is that L from Death Note I spy?

Barefoot, touching Yazoo with his finger tips, chewing on his fingernail...

That sounds impossibly like L.

0.o

Then again, it maybe a mistake I'm making. Oh well.

Wait, what, a pressie for Cate from Lozzie...

Ah, the sweetness =D

And oh, Loz gettin' Jealous, eh?

I agree with Cate, that's cute =3

Hold on, what the hell did Kadaj do to the girl?

-hopes to find out soon-

Ooooooh the kiss, I loved how you discribed the kiss between Cate and Loz.

It was hot =D

Overall, a great chapter =D It's getting me excited for the next cause of the little questions you put in my head.

Me wants to see how this fic moves along.

So update when you can, kay?

It's cruel to keep me waiting! -pouts-

&&&& Loz, clothes off, NOW!!!!

I reviewed =3

Lunatic Angel/ Silent Doll