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for Utter Chaos

by ChibiVincent

schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so funny! Vincent is cuter than a baby chocobo, and I had a blast picturing him rubbing against Cid's hand like a little kitty. Aw shucks.

I especially loved knowing that Vincent has nightmares of an undying moogle army. I laughed at that so much.

Silly boys. They're so cute.

Great work!
schedule April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The sex was good :-) The snuggling after was better--so heartwarming!
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You did it and it was awesome! I loved it!
Sleepy! Vincent is really cute. I want one.
I think moogles are the cutest things ever. Not sure why Squeenix threw them in the game because the purposes they serve are rather minor. Well, in XII they were kind of useful.
The new version looks cute, sure, but well, they're basically just bunnies with hats now. Which, I don't know, makes them less than moogles, doesn't it? I don't know.

Still, I loved it!
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Especially the characterization of Chaos, it's wicked without being overly dramatic and dark. Very enjoyable read, hope to see more soon!
schedule March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, utter cuteness! With porn! :-)

Looking forward to the next chapter!
person Kiune
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like! I like very much! The ending of this chapter made me laugh Cid: "Wait,what?" Hehe, oh Chaos and his dirty mouth, sometimes I think Chaos is in my head and then I remember that those dirty thoughts are entirely my own. I always appreciate a good Valenwind, keep it up!
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aw, this chapter was pretty cute. I'm glad you just got on with it. I hate stories where it's like ten chapters of people being awkward before finally getting together. Your Vincent is so cuuuutteee!

And I love chocobos to bits, really I do! But I think Moogle's are cuter! XD Although, I'm not quite sure whether I think the original moogles or the bunny-looking FFXII moogles are cuter. Bleh, but that's kinda going off topic.

Anywho, this chapter was super cute! Love it!
schedule March 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...."Wait, what?" Such a Cid answer XD I'm digging this so far! More!....pleaseeee?
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story! I am looking forward to reading more! :-)
schedule March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you soooo much this pairing needs to be done more, and you captured the character perfectly. You have inspired me to right some of my own.

BTW you Pen name is from Shining Collection, I think?