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May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hey you should add more chapters or make a sequel it wold make a good on going story
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December 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Unusual pairing but I like it. I do think Vaan gave in a little too easily in the begining though. Have you thought of continuing this? Could make a great multichapter fic.
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May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Uh... buh... guh....
That was delicious.
MOAR
That was delicious.
MOAR
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May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a twist that I haven't found before! I really enjoyed your fic and have only one question...Are you going to do a sequel? 'Cause that would be totally awesome! ;)
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May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very hot! I love this pairing.
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April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I gotta admit I was a little iffy about the pairing, but I'm so glad I read it, your story is awesome! I would love to read more of this (if you continue with it), maybe read Vaan's POV and the other's reactions.
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March 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful plot with beautifully written smut. It's a rare pairing, so that was a plus to the overall story. The biggest problem with this story was, however, the repetive flow in opening sentences for each paragraph, there was this over use of saying Vayne or Vaan that it made it confusing at times or just a tad bit annoying. Overall, though, a great story and I hope to read more from you.
Sincerely,
Ed the Bus (Commonly Known as Oedipus)
Sincerely,
Ed the Bus (Commonly Known as Oedipus)
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March 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hurrah! A Vayne/Vaan pairing! You have no idea how much this made my day, and it was so nicely done to. ^_^ I think you should continue on with this, I would be so happy. Need more of this pairing. Plus id love to see the reactions of Basch and Balthier. THanks again. :3