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May 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
O.O add more!
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March 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh, I love this! Just the thought of Seymour and Vincent together.... *drools*. Pairings? Definately, Vincent and Seymour please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The chemistry would be awesome!
Baralai, Gippal, and Nooj turning up! Hell yes!!! These three boys just don't get enough love from the community, in my opinion! but who to put them with... hmmmm.... Gippal would be great with Cid... they could play with machines together! LOL. Baralai and Nooj....hmmm... either one with cloud would be awesome... Maybe both with Cloud? sorry, I'm terribly greedy... LOL.
Anyway, whatever you choose, if you do continue this, I'd read and I'm sure I'd enjoy it! Hope you do decide to continue as it's a great story idea!
Baralai, Gippal, and Nooj turning up! Hell yes!!! These three boys just don't get enough love from the community, in my opinion! but who to put them with... hmmmm.... Gippal would be great with Cid... they could play with machines together! LOL. Baralai and Nooj....hmmm... either one with cloud would be awesome... Maybe both with Cloud? sorry, I'm terribly greedy... LOL.
Anyway, whatever you choose, if you do continue this, I'd read and I'm sure I'd enjoy it! Hope you do decide to continue as it's a great story idea!
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June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey Vincent-lover. ;) Thank you very much fro you review. I had to move my story to another place and you review disappeared. Sorry about that. :( I didn't mean to be disrespectful. I check out your myspace... cute kitty. :) And really nice photos. You rock girl. Oh, and thanks for a nice story.
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May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this!
It's so quaint and funny. I like the general air of obliviousness going on here, it's very charming.
I would like to add just a little snippet of constructive criticism here, though...one thing I've noticed with a lot of crossovers (which you could class this as), is that the writer tends to cram in too many references to the original story. As in, the FFX guys are spending a bit too much time talking about the situation from their canon point of view. I don't mean that you shouldn't mention these things, but it feels like they're being crammed in a bit. You could just introduce a little bit of information at a time, and I don't think you'd have to worry about anyone being confused.
Anyway! That's just my little bit of input...otherwise I think this is brilliant, and I love your style!
Please update soon!
~Plex
(P.S: Thanks for reviewing Nowhere ;)
It's so quaint and funny. I like the general air of obliviousness going on here, it's very charming.
I would like to add just a little snippet of constructive criticism here, though...one thing I've noticed with a lot of crossovers (which you could class this as), is that the writer tends to cram in too many references to the original story. As in, the FFX guys are spending a bit too much time talking about the situation from their canon point of view. I don't mean that you shouldn't mention these things, but it feels like they're being crammed in a bit. You could just introduce a little bit of information at a time, and I don't think you'd have to worry about anyone being confused.
Anyway! That's just my little bit of input...otherwise I think this is brilliant, and I love your style!
Please update soon!
~Plex
(P.S: Thanks for reviewing Nowhere ;)