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I absolutely love this story. I cant wait to read more! its been breathtakingly beautiful and emotional.. and touching. you'v written so well. and the relationship between cloud and Reno...seems molded to be perfectly together!

Oh! This was such a sweet and touching and romantic chapter! I love it!

And...it's not going to last is it? *peers at you* There's more angst coming, isn't there? *sigh* Make like a bandaid and get it over quick so we can get to this sweet romantic wedding they're planning...with lots more lovely smexing? *looks hopeful*

Great story. Wonderfully developed plot and characters. Loving, and sexy as hell. It's nice to see how their relationship has developed and deepened into a truly meaningful bond. A joy to read. Thank you.

something is wrong with Cloud, other than the lack of healing, he is being too....submissive. Even though you could say his trauma has 'put things into perspective' concerning his life and relationship with Reno, it seems more than that. Except the first few things he's saying yes to everything Reno says and his demeanor is meek and submissive, NOT Cloud at all.

What Reno loved about their relationship was not just Cloud's quiet and troubled soul but the interplay between them, Cloud's sense of humor, their sometimes sarcastic interplay and the hot and passionate, sometimes fierce sex.

Now Cloud is obediently not only doing what he asks\says\suggests, but having wild sex even though he knows it's not good for him, where he would have protested before. And that potion thing? Normally Cloud would take it, knowing he'd need the strength and health to fight later, yet he shrugged it off to his 'dom'.

Wouldn't it make more sense he take it so he can heal and protect Reno?

Yes! Confide in him, Cloud! Together you can overcome this!! (I hope!)

AAAAaa!

That's all I have to say!

What, who....darn it! I can figure why (I think). How are Our Heroes going to defeat these darn people??? Grr.

*breathes and waits for the next chapter*

Wow. I just read the first 12 chapters...I had a feeling with those dreams and nightmares that you were going to end up with some sort of danger and desperation for Our Boys...and boy did you deliver!

The hot scenes are HOT and the action is believable. You write well! :-)

I look forward to seeing where this cliffhanger leads to! *crossing my fingers for the Boys*

:_: God... Cloud is soo OOC....It's too bad because I really like this pairing, but man...you guys just totally ruined it for me. Don't get me wrong your writing is lovely, but I just can not take reading Cloud so weak and fragile and to Reno of all people... I mean, he did slam a door in his face and kicked his ass in the game.

Aaahhh! I didn't even know you were on AFF.Net...I came across this one while uploading one of my own! I loved this story the first time I read it and it's just as good as I remember! Reno's so possessive and vulnerable at the same time in this fic, I just love it. Funny how these two characters can compliment one another so well with their different personalities. You did a great job here, kudos!