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for On The Edge Of Chaos

by cain

schedule April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OM*! - Please continue! I really wanna know what happens! D:
person Kiran
schedule October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great start, I hope you plan to continue.
schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Jaw drops* OMG!
*shakes Vincent* What on earth is wrong with you today? *Vincent grows angry*
Oh shit... *runs away screaming* Please gimme another chapter because I love this so far, please, before he kills me!
person lo
schedule May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting. I hope they can work though this together.
person ym
schedule May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay is Vincent having a nervous breakdown or what??? Please keep writing, so I can find out what the heck is wrong with him?
person Asphyxiate.Me.Baby.
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! I've love to see more.

You have a few errors and at times it's hard to figure who's talking, but other than that the concept is really very good, and I hope you update soon!
schedule May 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You certainly have my attention! What's up with Vin, anyway? The pairing is cute- it is sad to see Vin so nasty to Cid, though. Keep writing?