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May 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story. You really captured the way that fantasies tend to flicker back and forth, and managed to have them both in character. Thank you for the wonderful read!
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June 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow.
Incredibly well-written, dreamy smut, skipping from one provocative moment to the next, with enough detail and characterization so that it really is THEM, rather than "random sex scene with character's names plastered over body parts".
You managed to find a way to make it plausibly in character, part of canon. (An obvious solution, but one I had not pondered.)
Three thumbs up!
More, please? Most of the erotica posted here is eye-gougingly awful.
Incredibly well-written, dreamy smut, skipping from one provocative moment to the next, with enough detail and characterization so that it really is THEM, rather than "random sex scene with character's names plastered over body parts".
You managed to find a way to make it plausibly in character, part of canon. (An obvious solution, but one I had not pondered.)
Three thumbs up!
More, please? Most of the erotica posted here is eye-gougingly awful.