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for Everything He Needs

by Umegaki

schedule May 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OKAY. Since this doesn't have reviews, I have to be the first!

So... Where do I begin...?

First I want to say, it's wonderful, the characterizations you used for them all. And secondly, I like how you make me imagine everything as if it were really happening through your words without even going into description.

I myself am a fan of this pairing, and seriously, I think you made this work very well. Congrats!