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May 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's an interesting concept for a story, but I like it. A few spelling/grammar problems, but nothing serious or overtly noticeable and the chapters are a little short but that's ok. I LOVE Seifer and any story not depicting him as the bad guy is a good one on my list.
Keep writing and don't worry about not getting alot of reviews, most people won't even if they liked it. Especially on this site. If you post on multiple site, you'll get more. Try fanfiction.net if you haven't already.
Keep writing and don't worry about not getting alot of reviews, most people won't even if they liked it. Especially on this site. If you post on multiple site, you'll get more. Try fanfiction.net if you haven't already.
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May 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh LOL Zelly.
Hilarious that you brought up the whole leather pants = ghey argument.
God Selph is such a doll and really? Well then i'll review as much as I can.
Hilarious that you brought up the whole leather pants = ghey argument.
God Selph is such a doll and really? Well then i'll review as much as I can.
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May 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
^_^ I like how the story is progressing so far. It's fun and an interesting concept. Imagine if garden really did make them take classes like that... Anyways, keep up the good work.
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May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
awww!!! i luvs this story!! what a fun concept. never really crossed my mind to put home ec. in!!! cant wait till the next chap!!
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May 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
-poke poke-
WOMAN. update this :/ it seems as though no one in this site wants to write about Seifell anymore :(
they're so sexy together... I don't even know why it's stopped :( but i've liked it so far, so i'm hoping that there is more to come!
WOMAN. update this :/ it seems as though no one in this site wants to write about Seifell anymore :(
they're so sexy together... I don't even know why it's stopped :( but i've liked it so far, so i'm hoping that there is more to come!
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May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A cute beginning! I look forward to seeing where you go from here :-)
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May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i am loving it i only wish we had that at the school i went to
Keep writeing or i will cast the curse of one thousand rabid fangirls
Keep writeing or i will cast the curse of one thousand rabid fangirls
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May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious and interesting.
Zell being the wife fits perfectly can't wait for the next chapter.
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Zell being the wife fits perfectly can't wait for the next chapter.
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