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by Lynsey

schedule June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This one is so awesome! It's rare to see Cloud in control, but it makes it perfect that he's in control yet faltering at times. Plus, it would seem unbelievable and weird if Sephiroth and Zack didn't have control outside of Seph's apartment. So I'm glad that Cloud knows his place, yet both Seph and Zack know theirs too 'wink' Totally loved it!
schedule June 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!! This was SOOOO not what I was expecting when I first started reading this one. Goddamn... ughgugh. Please know that this will be fapped over. And I'd basically do anything for a sequel.