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by Rina76

schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohmagawd!!! This was incredibly hawt!!! ROTL!!! Yaz IS a homicidal fairy with a big-ass gun!!! XDDDD Great Sum-up! You have these guys to a "T." I am loving this story so far! Thank you for posting it, chicas! XD
person fyrbyrd
schedule July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Smut...soon...please.
schedule July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW, WOWW, WOWOWOOOOOW, perfeclty described hot bath scene!
I'd never read an innocent shampoo cleaner be so,so damned hot!
You guys rock my world with this smut!
TEASERS!!!!!!!!!!!
Hugs
schedule June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oooohhh F...lovely, extremely fucking hot!
I can't for the next chapter...
The time of the story's development is just perfect.

Hugs and kisses you adorable TEASERS!
person Bela
schedule June 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh MY F GOD.... Yazoo is just the most yummie think in the world by your eyes guys!
I loved the scene od the strip and his thoghts about tease...Just as you two are...TEASERS...
Hugs and kisses
person fyrbyrd
schedule June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Teasers! Again! I want more more more!
schedule June 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH My GOD!!!!! You guys match perfectly together, that's awesome and wonderful.This is intense, cute, sexy, teaser, totally Lozoo and I love it! I can't wait to read more!

Sorry for my bad english and hugs from Brazil!
person natzilla
schedule June 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yess ! an update :D Perfect for breakfast together with my cup of coffee ! I really enjoyed that dirty little encounter there, it was pretty intense. But that damn phone of Loz ! It always rings at the wrong moment :o
and btw.. yes Renzoo is my favourite pairing but Yaz and his brothers are yummie as well. Its a strange case of incest feeling totally natural somehow, with these 3 :p
person natzilla
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
2 of my favourite writers here ! and a very cool story ! Cant wait for more smut ! I like Lozoo, ;) Not as much as Renzoo but its a close second ! Great job, I guess I have to bookmark it since I never found out how to favourite any stories here.. :o/
Hey girls ! dont forget, respectively "The Wedding" and "Legacy" :D I am waiting eargerly for updates :D
person fyrbyrd
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes I echo those words, "Why did you stop?" Teasers....