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July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
damn, that was hot ! I just read it again ! ;)
I can just go along with Rina when she says : "He worships Yazoo, completely and totally, and it's gorgeous to read about! You mix real feeling with the sex and I'm a big fan of that."
My thoughts exactly :D
Great job girlz ! I feel very pervy now :D
I can just go along with Rina when she says : "He worships Yazoo, completely and totally, and it's gorgeous to read about! You mix real feeling with the sex and I'm a big fan of that."
My thoughts exactly :D
Great job girlz ! I feel very pervy now :D
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July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so hot. It was so beautiful and I hope to see a sequel or something in the near future!
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July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh yum! I do love a good claiming story, especially claiming that sex kitten.
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July 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice work, you guys! *congratulates you on a successful partnership* Chephren, I love your emotional Vincent. He worships Yazoo, completely and totally, and it's gorgeous to read about! You mix real feeling with the sex and I'm a big fan of that.
Schwaerze, it's interesting to see how your writing changes when you write with someone else. Here, your Yazoo seems so much...I don't know how to describe it...sweeter?... than you usually write him. I particularly adored this line:
His touch became feather light, almost loving and then he lowered his head to the man´s chest, pressing his soft lips against it, murmuring "Someone hurt you, hm? Let me make it all go away..."
*melts /and/ dies*
That's probably the nicest thing you've ever made Yazoo say or do. Ever. lol
Yes. My interest is definitely here and if you talented two wish to write more, I'll read it!
Schwaerze, it's interesting to see how your writing changes when you write with someone else. Here, your Yazoo seems so much...I don't know how to describe it...sweeter?... than you usually write him. I particularly adored this line:
His touch became feather light, almost loving and then he lowered his head to the man´s chest, pressing his soft lips against it, murmuring "Someone hurt you, hm? Let me make it all go away..."
*melts /and/ dies*
That's probably the nicest thing you've ever made Yazoo say or do. Ever. lol
Yes. My interest is definitely here and if you talented two wish to write more, I'll read it!
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July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Vincent and Yazoo are my favorite characters and you've written them so beautifully, the scenes were hot and sexy. I hope you continue with the story.