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for Master of Slaves

by arsenicstings

person Anon
schedule April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to update?! I wanna find out what happens!
person dawn_of_twilight
schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. Seifer is slowly but steadily chipping away at Squall's resistance. XD. Update soon please!
person Kay
schedule April 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story so far. I am also glad to see a new chapter and I can't wait to see the next one.
schedule April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You've gotta keep going! I'm curious to see how this is going to end! I MUST KNOW!
schedule April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, that's a twisty mind you've got there, to come up with a plot like this....
I quite approve!
XD
person Skye
schedule April 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You have noooo idea how much you made my day by uploading this! I have been anxiously checking this every few days (I'm lying, every day!) to see if this gorgeous thing has graced me with a new chapter :3
I want you to continue this with this biggest please you have ever heard, so pleeeease do!
This story is just amazing...Like, really. I'm jealous ^_^
person Zannie
schedule April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
woot. Much love to the Squall, he is awesomely in character, as is Seifer. :)
person florinoir
schedule April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh please do continue!! I love that Squall was so feisty and pig headed!! Aaaah Squall... Make Seify suffer!
/Seifer:/ Do you actually read the story ass-face?! it's ME in control! ME!!!
Well...Yeah, but you have a run for your money!
/ Squall/ Just wait until I recover my strenght again...just wait... I WON THE FUCKIN' GAME!!!
...Squally.? i would like you to take like twenty or more step back, put your fork down and listen to me... it's an AU...
/Squall/ I DON'T GIVE A SHIT!! I WILL SHOW THIS FUCKER!! AGAIN!!MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!
i think he finally lost it... Sad... Aniway, please continue!!!^^
/Irvine/ Your empathy truly amaze me...
Shut up the futur slave!! Mwahahahahhahhahaha!!!!
Good continuation!^^
person Elly Liselle
schedule April 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the thought of Seifer training Squall with blades. :) This sounds interesting. I can't wait for Squall's... punishment. <3

On a broader scale, I just want to say that I love what you've done with the characters. I usually don't read extremely AU AUs, but I really enjoy this!!
schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is one of the few well written SxS stories out there. Please continue it. I know that I wait patiently for the next installment.

~Sophia