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*In the process of finish to clean up her floor of her saliva*
That was good...Slurp..Damnit! More towel sexysalveboy!!
/Squall, baring his fangs..hem theeth/ Don't.Call.Me.THAT!! I swear i'll KILL ALL OF YOU!!!
Seeeiiiifeeeer, your SLAVE need more s.p.a.n.k.i.n.g!^^
/Seifer/Gladly!
/Squall/ARG!!
I really really like your story!Squall's stubborn and fierce, Seifer's possessive..raaah I loooooooooooove this!!So...I hope Squall will not be in the Count's claws! But for the story(and my hormones...)...Go, go!!^^Goodcontinuation!!*o*
/Squall/T~T...

Oh gods that was SUCH an intense chapter! I LOVED IT! I can't wait for more!

I could seriously gush over this story all day long... and maybe more. I haven't been able to read for a while, but I am so glad I caught up. <3 The tension between Squall and Seifer just keeps escalating and soon it won't be able to contain itself, and I am very much looking forward to when it does explode. XP

I love your descriptions for everything, it really was interesting to read when Squall was strangling Nida and Eumolpus. Just in a way of imagining how he feels at those moments, probably like a cornered animal.

The end of this chapter was very satifying. I feel conflicted though! My inner pride is telling Squall to never give in to the slavery, but at the same time my love for Seifer just ignores all logic. :P Seifer is just too hot... he can do whatever he wants to Squall. XD

Oh, WTF! The site cut off like a paragraph of my review. :( Now I can't remember exactly I said. But yeah, I was very interested by the scenes you described Squall strangling Nida and Eumolpus, in the way of seeing it almost through the eyes of a cornered animal. I am glad he didn't end up killing anyone. And also the end scene for this chapter was very satisfying. But I feel conflicted! In a way I am rooting for Squall to not give in, but at the same time I want to read Squall and Seifer smut because I am so lacking it. I am so sad this fandom is dying slowly. I wish Square would make a sequel, just to bring in new fans and re-spark the interest. *cries* I am interested to see if Rinoa's hatred for Squall and obsession with Seifer will spark anything more serious. :o

I think it is save to say that I am loving you right now. Seifer is one sadistic son of a bitch... but it seems rather that's what Squall needs. <3 I can't wait for more!

Oh goodness you have no idea how much I enjoy this story! I anxiously check it everyday to see if you have uploaded!
Never before have I seen a story so angst filled and still manage to be secretly fluffy. It's truly amazing.
I couldn't possibly suggest anything, as I am too mesmerized to do so!
~Waits impatiently for the next upload~

gah I love this story! Squall is so darn stubborn but I love that! I'm still trying to figure out how you'll ever get him to like Seifer! Lol Please keep up the great work, and update soon.. :P

I wish I knew where you were going with this story. It's well-written, but I can't help being worried. So many stories for this series are just...Is this just going to be another story where Squall submits to a life of servitude and humilation, treated as a slut and a possession-as someone less than human. I know you don't want to spoil it, but please don't let your fic become like that. I keep hoping Seifer will realize the truth-he's no different from the others slave owners, no matter how he treats his slaves. He's just taking away the future and humanity of innocent kids.

You have no idea how much I adore this story!
It immediately, from the first chapter, got my full attention and kept it every moment.
You're descriptiveness is long and perfect, without being excessive.
I wish I had your ultimate talent in writing, and I look forward anxiously to your newest chapter!!

*claps* Bravo! I can't wait for more. Update again as soon as you can. Keep up the good work. There were a mere few grammatical/spelling mistakes, but nothing too serious. I enjoyed reading the newest chapters. I'll be waiting impatiently for more ^_^


Xander