rate_review Reviews

Wow... Wrong and hot all at once. I LOVE IT! Can't wait for more!

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My GOD, that was beautiful.

Still loving the fic. It's intriguing how Squall didn't object to the restraints so much as he objected to the cock-ring. Was that because it's forcing him to acknowledge his body's reaction to the (fucking hot) scene just before it?
And you appear to love my "husband", Uruwashii Uso. She's a wonderful woman, and I'm glad you like her too. -thumbs up-

Omg, thank god! I was starting to think you would never update.

Falling more and more in love with this story for every chapter! Even though I would love to see some yaoi action I can't resist Defiant-Squall :D I love so much how you made his character!

Oooh, a cliffhanger! Now I'm REALLY looking forward to the next chapter!! D: Can't wait!

Why aren't you updating?!

Love this story alot!! :D

Please, please, please, please, please write more.

I hope Squall doesn't submit. Seifer may not treat him as bad as the others, but he's still no different from those people. Any person who would take a human and make them into a pet like that needs some serious help and is a terrible person. Seifer thinks way too highly of himself. Most of the slaves he trades probably end up in that horrid place, getting "punished", as he calls that horror.

I'm not so sure I like the style you used at the very beginning. While it meshed well with Squall's incoherience, I found myself confused over the course of the chapter until it changed back to the original style. Of course, that was what you were going for, and it worked but it felt too much like jumping around for my taste. I don't really even understand why Squall was suddenly in pain or why Rinoa had collapsed like she had. Again, it's all very confusing.

Overall though, the chapter itself was good, and I'm looking forward to reading more of this tale.

Thanks for the read,
Anon

About...three-quarters of the way down the page, I let out a howl of amused delight, I must confess. "It's always gonna be sour grapes with you boy." Somehow, I don't see Squall "getting right with Jesus" any time soon.
About the fic itself...I love it. It really makes you question the morality of someone like Seifer, because even though he's contributing to the slave trade, he's doing it in a way that helps the slaves. And then, of course, there's the question of whether Squall's reacting in proportion to his captivity, or whether he's just being the stubborn ass that he is. XD

wow, darkly addicting, i hope you can update soon :)