rate_review Reviews

Yay!! new chapter. I just love your story! i have to say, there aren't enough seifer/squall stories out there, and yours is definetly one of the best. keep up with the wonderful writing! i want to know what happens to Squall!!!

Hello Mr. I'm-not-doing-anything-you-say Leonhart! I love how you've made Squall so proud that he won't be easy for Seifer.

Heck, if I were in Squall's shoes, or lack thereof, I'd let Seifer do anything to me! Corrr!

Love how you're going with the story though, and really can't wait for more! Keep it up!

I like what you did with Rinoa! Good way to keep her annoying mouth shut!

Poor Squall being so close yet so far, I don't think I'd have forgiven you if you let him run away. Seifer sure does need to punish him for that slip-up. Punish him in the nicest of teasing and tormenting ways of course *smiles innocently with halo beaming above head*

I'm really enjoying it so far, but I think Seifer needs to lock all doors and windows in his mansion, just so if Squall tries to do a runner again, he literally can't get out.

And speaking of Rinoa again, it would be funny if she let slip that she loved Seifer and he smacked her for it, but maybe that's just my horrid imagination.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

I had my doubts, I'll admit. Slavefics tend to leave the gate open for poor characterisation in the name of smut, but this is doing just nicely so far. I shall definitely be looking out for further installments.

So far, it's great! Wouldn't mind some more, though... ^-^

Really enjoyed the opening introduction to Seifer and Irvine, and this chapter to Squall also. It's encouraging to see a decent storyline that isn't pulled from the game.
Keep up the good work :)

Oooo, me likey where this is going! ;) Keep it up! I'm excited. :)

YOU MUST CONTINUE!!!!!
please make the chapters a little bit longer. this story has really captivated me.

XOXOXOX