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for GF 101

by Xax

schedule January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh fucking hot. i've gotten into anthro quite a bit in the last few years, and honestly, i've never really been a huge fan of Squall's character overall, but GOD that was so damn amazing. i'll be looking out for updates and new stories from you!
person muny
schedule December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
DAMN!!! that was hot. though im alittle disappointed that squall couldnt take the big doggy dick. maybe next time? Keep up the good work
person Anon
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God. Continue this. Now.
person Lightning
schedule October 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes you're right GF porn is in great demand..or not
It is fasnating and I love your way of writing it
also very very hot I don't blame Squall a bit who wouldn't get hot and bothered by all the muscles?

I'll check back but tell me do you intend to do anymore?
schedule September 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is just amazing in levels that cannot be described with words. Everything, absolutely everything about this story is magnificent. The extremely detailed sex is just perfect, sentence after sentence, and Ifrit's chapter remains my favorite to this day. Squall is just right in this story. Not an emo wimp, not a cold douchebag. The prose is simply fantastic, hooking you right from the start. There's absolutely nothing to criticise from this story (except, perhaps, the slow update speed. But it's actually extremely minor when you weigh it with the sheer excellence you deliver with every chapter).

I am eagerly awaiting the next instalment!
schedule July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HOLY HOT HELL!!! my lordie... that was quite.... original!.... *runs and hides bright red face* and Poor poor squall.... *giggles and runs away* seriously. I have NEVER read anything like this before. good job and again.... QUITE original....
schedule July 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
holy shit! I love this fic. The first time i found this fic was some time ago, and i was a bit hesitant at reading because I'm not into beast, I got halfway through and clicked away. But I thought to myself. 'What the hell, i'll read it to the end and see what happens' Wow... Best fic I've read in a long time. I hope you can come out with another chapter soon, but i know that in order to write a great fic; it takes time. So do your thing, i'll wait patiently for the next chapter.
person Skyler
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! YES YES YES ANOTHER CHAPTER!! You had me worried for a while there!!

I think the reason why your awesome story is so appealing is because... well, it's different! You have to hunt through the plethora of Seifer/Squall to find any good fics here anymore... while yours definately has it's own voice, and it's own stand while being awesomely sexy! Squall's personality is just awesome, I love how you showed his true colors with inner thoughts, rather than change how he acted in the game and talk a lot. I LOVED this new chapter! I loved the two chapters before it! I'm dying to read the next one!!

And... if I may say so, I think my favorite part about your story is the potential! What's going to happen when he gets all of the GF...? What's next for our hero?

The fact that he is slowly becoming more dominant and hungry in his quest for GF cock is just so freaking hot and amazing to me.

KEEP IT UP!! I LOVE YOU!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!
person Sikare
schedule June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I browse new fics on the Final Fantasy AFF, and that's how I found yours. Was bored enough to read it and it turned out disturbingly hot >:)
schedule June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah, but see, if we review it, we have to admit we read it and aren't some anonymous bits in the dark!

My, my you certainly have quite the imagination!! I can't WAIT to see what GF Squall encounters next! *grin*