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by Xax

person twilightsin
schedule June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your lemons are so intense and exciting to read. I'm really enjoying this. there isn't enough GF/Aeon/Esper/Summon whatever love in the ff fandom.
schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
very nice story, my mind went wandering after i read this for the second time thinking of what could happen next and it came up with Diablos coming to Squall in the night and taking him back to his own realm and fucking the living daylights out of Squall since he wont have to worry about Squall coming back to his friends limping and covered in cum.

and maybe you could also do a story where Squall gets fucked by bahamut?
person filiasan
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ever since I've read this fic, I've been trying to find something as good and as "bad" as this one (especially the fire cave chapter). But all I've ended up is disappointed. And I didn't used to be a big fan of "beast" fics (except ReixRyu, since '99). You've converted me.
person Otaku-chan
schedule May 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like your writing style. It's easy and INTERESTING to read. I love how you paint a vivid picture of the scene
And I find the whole SquallxGF concept intriguing. I've read some of your other stories and what can I say? You're a talented writer.
person Liera Antionette
schedule April 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! Especially the one with Diablos! He was my favorite GF in the entire game I sooo can't wait to see which GF he runs into next chappy. *pokes with a stick* This is a good review...reward you fan with working on the next chapter lol.
person kaleemmcintyre
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was a really fun story to read! I really liked how you drew out much more of Squall's emotions and yet kept him in character, so to speak. I hope you make another Ifrit/Squall story sometime soom. :) Oh and I was wondering if you were going to add another chapter to the Breath of Fire 3 Story Old Deal? I REALLY liked that one!
person Saiyanboy
schedule March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
whoa! I was totally not expecting that. Squall fucking Diablos. I'm still a little dissapointed that it was't Squall who got fucked, but I can quickly get over that. I love this chapter. What GF are you going to use for the next chapter? Cerberus? Pandemona? Leviathan? Quezecotl? Carbuncle? The Brothers? the list can go on and on. I'd really like to chat with you about your story and otherthings. My email is futurevet16@live.com. I hope to hear from you. And just in case I didn't say it, great story!
person Kalen
schedule October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow this story was epic.please, if you feel it's worth it, write more fics with the other GF's from VIII as well as X and the other FF games. My email is whitetigerwht@aol.com and i'd love to chat with you. please email me. also, what are the links to your FA and y gallery page?
person Mjrn
schedule August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can honestly say that I've never found any GF stories intriguing, especially involving Ifrit because...I just never saw it work, BUT...you undid all of that. Whoa. You wrote it out so well and detailed...wow. Hotness. I seriously cannot wait for more! I want to see whatever else you've got up your sleeve because I'm betting it's only going to get better from here. Please, please update soon (but even if you don't, I'll wait as long as I need to ;) )

Mjrn
person Salamandor
schedule July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*blushes* that was the most erotic thing I've ever read. But so awesome!!!