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July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That whole thing with him being the one to grab Cloud from the destruction? That is hardcore awesome.
Cloud's simple happiness is so endearing! I also love the way Sephiroth's fantasies are adding some porn to the plot. xD
Cloud's simple happiness is so endearing! I also love the way Sephiroth's fantasies are adding some porn to the plot. xD
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July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hoorrraaay another chapter! I loved how Sephiroth noticed every little thing about Cloud's reaction to his collar, and how grateful Cloud is for the name. I also like how he found himself a little lamp for downstairs, and how he keeps the door open a crack, dawwww! And Seph rubbing one out was hella hot.
MAOR! As soon as you can birth it, post it. Love this so much.
MAOR! As soon as you can birth it, post it. Love this so much.
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July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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That was the cutest thing I've ever read.
EVAR.
There are just no words.
That was the cutest thing I've ever read.
EVAR.
There are just no words.
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July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm confused as to what's on the name tag. From what I could tell, it was not the name Cloud. Correct me if I'm wrong. I'm loving this story. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's good. Enjoyable. Some of the grammar and sentences need to be checked over a couple of more times, but overall, I like it. Will you be showing more of when Cloud and Sephiroth are together?
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July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY MORE! That's so cute that he got Cloud a collar! I can't wait to see Cloud's reaction to it, and to his new name. :D Goddamnit, I love this story!
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July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, it's well written and the plot is good. Keep writing please! (sorry, I suck at reviews)
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July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So if Cloud's eyes are the color of the sky on earth, what color is the sky on the planet they're on now?
Cloud being scared of the dark is so cute, I love it.
Cloud being scared of the dark is so cute, I love it.
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July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Cloud is so damn cute, especially with such an innocently jaded outlook. I think that was a great chapter.
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July 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter! I enjoyed this one just as much as the others, but I know the feeling of putting out a supposedly sucky chapter - but this definitely did not suck for the reader!! So cute, and I can't wait to see what else happens in Seph's mansion-0-love!