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July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter (and the others too) did most definitely NOT suck! I love the concept, and I think the way you're writing Cloud and Seph is great :) It's nice to see how the 'events' :P in chapter 1 have developed, too, and I absolutely adored Cloud falling asleep and having Seph put him to bed!!!!
I look forwards to reading more :)
I look forwards to reading more :)
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July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Uhhh! Don't say it sucked. This was my favorite so far. Thanks for updating, I will be looking forward to more of this story.
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July 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this story! Its very good, I like how you are writing it. I cant wait for more chapters.
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July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh I love how grossed out Sephiroth is at Cloud, and how LITTLE Cloud is compared to him! haha! What a cute visual. And I like how Zack is so caring of him... daww. Sad that he and Aerith can't have any little wierd babies, though.
Moar is in order. It is in order RIGHT NAO!
Moar is in order. It is in order RIGHT NAO!
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July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am feeling so much love for this story. That was absolutely fantastic. Such a great concept, and the sex was damn hot. I adored the emotional side as well, with how possessive Sephiroth was. This hit so many of my buttons in all the right ways. Great work!
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July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this fiction. It's well written, easy to understand, yet very descriptive on top of that. Excellent job so far. :) I look forward to your next update. ^_^
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July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love this! Love the twist on the humans and the ... Shin-Raians? Haha, whatever. I really like it, and can't wait to see what else happens!
The sex was super hot, of course!
IT IS WELL RECEIVED INDEED!
The sex was super hot, of course!
IT IS WELL RECEIVED INDEED!
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July 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. I especially liked Sephiroth's thoughts between claiming and love.