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for Golden Lotus (Chapter 4 up!)

by schwaerze

person anonanon
schedule April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Mmm that was absolutely fantastic! Thank you for posting this story and sharing it here, please update once more when you have the inspiration and opportunity.
person RJaneyP
schedule January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A very good example of sexy writing.... and most worthy mastabatory litature. It makes one want to be alone by theirselves to just to read and appreciate the full experience of this lovely "tail" LOL G
schedule September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah that was good. And we updated on the same day! Want to read more. Oh and I have two Toshiba laptops, one is older and red, the other is silver, can you guess their names? I still use both.
person Rose
schedule August 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*purrrrrrrrs* damn this is hot.. love Seph/Yaz you two do them perfectly.
*secretly hoping for some Tseng/Yaz too*
person fyrbyrd
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my and I've let this gem get passed me too. Sorry, you know I'd love anything with Yaz in it. And you know that I definitely need...want more.
person miau.
schedule August 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
DAMN IT, WHEN DOES IT GET TO BUSINESS???? NO MORE CLIFFHANGERS!!!!
person Infek
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very titillating chapter. ^_^ But I have to admit I don't quite understand Yazoo's eagerness when it comes to Sephiroth, since in the previous two chapters there had been a certain... reluctance about Yazoo when he remembered his brother. Or maybe I'm just reading it wrong.

So you are in fact a writer's duo? So who does what? I'm curious now.
person Infek
schedule July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really pity Yazoo in your story. You don't describe his emotional turmoils directly but by describing his living-situation and his meetings with others which is a really nice idea.

Thank you for the update!
person GeeSpot
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot Stuff, write moooooooore please! G
person Anon
schedule July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update ASAP! It's a lovely story!