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July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you guys work /very/ well together, I must say! I can see you bouncing off each other's ideas and suggestions here, clearly having much fun with it too! And that makes it immensely fun to read. ^__^ I enjoyed this a lot more than I thought I would. Yazoo working in a whore house could have been very depressing (the whole, 'let's torture/rape Yazoo and make him suffer painfully for his beauty' routine) but I am glad you are not doing that here. He lives in a beautiful place (not filthy squalor), he is respected and well looked after, it seems, and has supportive friends in the business (and one very supportive bodyguard as well! XD) Despite the setting and subject matter, this story is quite playful and upbeat and I must say, I am just /loving/ the entire interaction between Tseng and Yazoo; what they are each thinking, their involuntary reponses to each other's presence and touch. That's utterly delightful to me! Poor Tseng. He is completely lost. Though, to resist such temptation...what a gentleman. *sigh* Schwaerze, you write him impeccably! You've captured Rufus' (obnoxiously smug) personality perfectly too. Prick. lol
Chephren, I enjoy your version of Yazoo. It's always interesting to get another writer's perspective on him and you have made him in IC without being too cold, cruel and distant as he could have been in such a situation. You haven't made him defeated or dead inside, being used for his body every day. It's like he's accepted his deal in life and is trying to make the best of it and find enjoyment and simple pleasures where he can. I also like that he's friendly to the other workers, even though they are jealous of/in love with him (understandably, too!).
Hehe, love reading about the other 'girls' who are there too, though I thought Reno would have been one of them. C'mon, he's /born/ to be a whore! XD
Enjoyed reading about Genesis' room too. I hope we get to see him use some of his toys... ;)
Great job, you guys, and I look forward to more!
(And at least now Yazoo has a valid reason for screwing every man in sight lol)
Chephren, I enjoy your version of Yazoo. It's always interesting to get another writer's perspective on him and you have made him in IC without being too cold, cruel and distant as he could have been in such a situation. You haven't made him defeated or dead inside, being used for his body every day. It's like he's accepted his deal in life and is trying to make the best of it and find enjoyment and simple pleasures where he can. I also like that he's friendly to the other workers, even though they are jealous of/in love with him (understandably, too!).
Hehe, love reading about the other 'girls' who are there too, though I thought Reno would have been one of them. C'mon, he's /born/ to be a whore! XD
Enjoyed reading about Genesis' room too. I hope we get to see him use some of his toys... ;)
Great job, you guys, and I look forward to more!
(And at least now Yazoo has a valid reason for screwing every man in sight lol)
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July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I ended up getting goosebumps at this. I can't wait to read more from you.
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July 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm interested in reading much, much more! The tone of your story is really appealing to me, and your writing-style seems to improve with each story you write... (This is not meant insulting in any way, BTW.)
You have attention to detail without it becoming too much and a sense of drama that I love.
Looking forward to reading more from you!
You have attention to detail without it becoming too much and a sense of drama that I love.
Looking forward to reading more from you!