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by fyrbyrd074

person MoggiyeM
schedule March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ack, my curiosity's been peaked! it's like a showdown between Vincent and Sephiroth now!
schedule September 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Woooot, new chapter!!! And you´re right, I am much more happy now that the new chapter is up :D And that you consider my well-being so much *snuggles* But now on to the chapter:

First squeal when I read about the paring: It´s a Seph/Yaz, yaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyy!!! I love you!

Haha, Sephy is so charming XDDDDDD Calling Yazoo 'pretty' and being so foresightful XD
Ew, and he´s twisted as well... I bet before the end Yaz doesn´t know what´s reality and what´s dream anymore.

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WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!! It´s Sephy´s, it´s Sephy´s, lalalalala XDDD I knew it was his baby, deep down *happy dance* Gehehe, and he sure pounded Yaz´s ass good, no doubt about that! So really, there´s no use in fighting the one winged angel Yaz ;)

Whoa, I love Sephy talking dirty, and he´s so right!!! (my wanton little bitch in heat you were.- wonderful!)

Hahaha, Yazoo is so pragmatic, and his poor belly hurts *pets him and whispers to Sephy 'take the chance!'*

*dies of massive nosebleed from the inage of Sephiroth carrying a nekkid Yazoo over his shoulder and spanking him*

Yeah, don´t fight it Yaz, just get laid again XD I wonder if he gets tired of it though.... Or if maybe he wants to just stay with Vincent? And the baby? Or maybe he doesn´t know yet? So many questions...

I love that Sephiroth thinks he owns Yazoo, whether Yazoo wants it or not! He´s so wonderfully arrogant, he just takes what he wants and I think it´s wonderful! But I guess Vincent won´t be happy about it, I wonder if he´ll claim Yazoo back?

Oh, and here they go for a second round *drool* So smexy, I bet it must have been really sensual, and the position is interesting!

Awwww, so sweet how Vincent calms him down, I think it´s awesome that he shows more feelings now!!!

I wonder if Sephiroth really i sthe father or... Gah, I´m all confused now XDDD Wonderful chapter dear, can´t wait to read moar!!!!