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December 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Salarta,
Good ending. Everything came together pretty well. Though I would have added a line or two at the end after Edward looks at the bulge in Rosa's belly where someone asks Edward what he thinks happened. Edward would get a look from Cecil and Rosa telling him to either play along with everyone's lack of recollection of the events that transpired or tell a sanitized version of what happened. :-)
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December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Epic Seven Part Review, GO!
Jokes aside, there's little I can say that I've not, aside that, naturally, I would have loved to have seen the Cecil/Rosa scene extended.
Aside from that, the only problem I had was that I didn't get around to reviewing this earlier
Jokes aside, there's little I can say that I've not, aside that, naturally, I would have loved to have seen the Cecil/Rosa scene extended.
Aside from that, the only problem I had was that I didn't get around to reviewing this earlier
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December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Two, Two Reviews, Ahahaha!
Edge so needed the "What is a Man?" line, but it works just as well later on. The fact that he somehow convinced the Appots to come with, in the attire that they wore, shows how much more pimptastic he is compared to other ninja characters from the overall series.
(If only Edward had a morningstar tipped whip, would have been win)
Edge so needed the "What is a Man?" line, but it works just as well later on. The fact that he somehow convinced the Appots to come with, in the attire that they wore, shows how much more pimptastic he is compared to other ninja characters from the overall series.
(If only Edward had a morningstar tipped whip, would have been win)
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December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Three is the number you shall count, and the number of reviews to be counted, is Three!
As we mentioned, Yang is really the only one who fits as the Werewolf, and YingYi as his Dragon lady Mistress was a nice touch, showing her more tempting side. An interesting idea could have been Yang not affected aside from the new body, but that's just an afterthought, an homage to his quick recovery of his amnesia in the original game
As we mentioned, Yang is really the only one who fits as the Werewolf, and YingYi as his Dragon lady Mistress was a nice touch, showing her more tempting side. An interesting idea could have been Yang not affected aside from the new body, but that's just an afterthought, an homage to his quick recovery of his amnesia in the original game
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December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Four is the number of Death itself, but even this number can part before the cowering darkness....
You handled the Whore very well, although part of me would have loved to have seen her get violated by Titan for the sheer depravity of such a scene. Nipple penetration would have also made me laugh, although she probably would have loved such a thing in the first place.
You handled the Whore very well, although part of me would have loved to have seen her get violated by Titan for the sheer depravity of such a scene. Nipple penetration would have also made me laugh, although she probably would have loved such a thing in the first place.
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December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dr. Ion, the Fifth Review?!?
Fitting, as here we deal with Cid and his daug...er, his monst...er, wait, nope, daughter!
Something tells me that his daughter would be more happy that he's active, then the fact that her father's seed fills her young womb.
We're getting closer, and Edward feels more confident than ever.... will that be his downfall?
Fitting, as here we deal with Cid and his daug...er, his monst...er, wait, nope, daughter!
Something tells me that his daughter would be more happy that he's active, then the fact that her father's seed fills her young womb.
We're getting closer, and Edward feels more confident than ever.... will that be his downfall?
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December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
6, the Review of the Beast, minus a few hundred devils and demons.....
You have to feel bad for Edward here, he goes though all this shit, and then, BAM, SPOONY BARD!!!!!! Gets blown by a corrupted version of his beloved wife, and gets the spiritual shit beaten out of him by his ever bitter psudo-father in law.
He's almost there though, just one last fight left for the Bard, Can He do It?
I'm taking bets on the corrupted Paladin and his bride!
You have to feel bad for Edward here, he goes though all this shit, and then, BAM, SPOONY BARD!!!!!! Gets blown by a corrupted version of his beloved wife, and gets the spiritual shit beaten out of him by his ever bitter psudo-father in law.
He's almost there though, just one last fight left for the Bard, Can He do It?
I'm taking bets on the corrupted Paladin and his bride!
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December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Seven, Seven Successful Reviews, Ahahaha!!
And finally, Everything is wrapped up, the curse is fully revealed and, as finally broken, the guests learn a little something about themselves, and have a little 'reward' for their troubles, and Rosa has a new throne, 'necklace', and a heavy belly that's going to be quite the mess to drain out, although something tells me she'll enjoy replacing what was emptied once it's gone. Man, that kid's gonna have one happy mother! Someone should really go help Rydia though, as much as I hate to say it. As sex addicted as a barely there teenager in an adult's body might be, I don't think she wants to be pinned down by a chocobo forever, now does she?
Lastly, congrats on finishing up the fic. Now go get some pizza, and go find a crazy party!!!
And finally, Everything is wrapped up, the curse is fully revealed and, as finally broken, the guests learn a little something about themselves, and have a little 'reward' for their troubles, and Rosa has a new throne, 'necklace', and a heavy belly that's going to be quite the mess to drain out, although something tells me she'll enjoy replacing what was emptied once it's gone. Man, that kid's gonna have one happy mother! Someone should really go help Rydia though, as much as I hate to say it. As sex addicted as a barely there teenager in an adult's body might be, I don't think she wants to be pinned down by a chocobo forever, now does she?
Lastly, congrats on finishing up the fic. Now go get some pizza, and go find a crazy party!!!
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December 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Salarta,
I do hope you finish this one sooner rather than later. It is so difficult to find fanfics (let alone decent ones) that actually center on Edward and his struggles. It is refreshing. Good job.
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November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great fic, I hope you do the last chapter quickly. I especially loved all the TF in it. Thanks for a great read.