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by albedosreqium

schedule May 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just read through the whole 39 chapters last night and today. Ooo... is cloud gonna run to reno... dun dun dunnn the story has been fun, nail biting, and hot all at the same time. Maybe you should just have these poor sexy guys all have a big ole pile of fun... poor poor frustrated reno and poor neglected cloud and seph too... yay... cant wait to read more!!!
schedule May 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh...Zack will have some serious making up to do now!! I mean, on the one hand, I understand Urgent, and Genesis clones running amuck does qualify, but leaving poor Cloud like that...ouch!

I love, love, love the idea of Rufus and Sephiroth fighting over Reno! I still have no idea who Reno will end up with! Oo, maybe a threesome? *grin*

This story is certainly living up to its Title, though! :-)
schedule March 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the different POVs in this story.

No clue how you've done it but you've actually made me like Cloud and I can't stand him most times. Loved the conversation between Tseng and Rufus, 'Paper Tiger' really does hit the mark!

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter :D
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Indeed! Poor Reno!!

I do hope that mean Rufus gets what's coming to him! Darn him!

And I was so hoping Sephiroth would be the reason ;-)
schedule February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay you updated!

This was a very sweet chapter and you make me like Zack/Cloud (I'm normally not able to stand Cloud even though I love Zack).
My fav chapters are the ones with Reno though (or all of them) because you simply write him so well!

Looking forward to the next update and hope that my reviewing abilities will have returned by then.

/Vega Kapera
schedule February 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I found this fic yesterday and am now caught up.

Wow. Uhm, yeah. Poor Reno *laughs* I am rooting for him to get some, though! And I'm kind of hoping for Sephiroth! Not enough Sephiroth/Reno love in this world! *grin*

So...yeah. Cinnamon and vanilla happen to be a favorite scent combination of mine, as well. I had to laugh when I read that. (If you check out my profile here, I've written a LOTR fic titled that! LOL!)

Excellent story, lots of lovely hot lemon...and poor, poor Reno. *laughs again* I look forward to the next chapters! Keep up the good work!
person kyouteki
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Who cares if rufus is in calm, give the man a mobile! lol you could probably squeeze in a risque phone conversation. I really thought the jumping scene and the helicopter conversation with sephiroth was amazing it gave me shivers!
person Yaoilover
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually do the whole review thing, but this story has seriously got me hooked. I look forward to every chapter, and seeing the update is one of the highlights of my day. I'm never had even thought about Reno and Sephiroth together before this story, and now I love the idea. You're so great at writing all these characters and weaving their storylines together. Great job!
schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved Sephiroth in this latest chapter!
I know my reviews aren't much to hang in the christmas tree (yes, direct translation of a saying. Doesn't work too well) but I hope they make you feel that someone reads and enjoys them (a lot!).

Vega Kapera
schedule January 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh my, bet Sephiroth didn't anticipate THAT. mwahahahah!!

Absolutely INFATUATED with this fic!! Your love circles are like, complex and crazy! XD Looking forward to more!!