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January 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
If that shirt makes a reappearance I will be very happy.
Being a big fan of Tseng it's always nice to see him appear ^^. What can I say? That man always needs more love.
The dream sequence was a cheap trick but you pulled it off very nicely, the reader sort of follows Reno's thoughts and travels with him from 'hm..' to 'WTF'. Me like.
Love Sephiroth's stalking and his inner dialogue during that. Reno is Reno and Reno is always wonderful to see.
Looking forward to more!
Being a big fan of Tseng it's always nice to see him appear ^^. What can I say? That man always needs more love.
The dream sequence was a cheap trick but you pulled it off very nicely, the reader sort of follows Reno's thoughts and travels with him from 'hm..' to 'WTF'. Me like.
Love Sephiroth's stalking and his inner dialogue during that. Reno is Reno and Reno is always wonderful to see.
Looking forward to more!
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January 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story and great chapter! Can't wait for the next update! :D
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January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you do know you are tesing me not getting reno laid... i wonder who it will be... maybe a major orgie with zack cloud reno seph rufus?
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January 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've grown really fond of this story and I find myself eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
This story is well written, has a balanced amount of detail and a varied language that makes it very pleasant to read. The dialogue is fantastic and it is nice to see how you use their inner voices, not many fanfiction authors are able to pull that off but I must say that it is a joy to see how you use that tool in your story telling. The amount of thought you have put into shaping the little twists exceeds what at least 85% of all fanfiction writers out there tend to do.
The one wish I have is that I would love to see more of Tseng. You present him wonderfully and he does, quite frankly, need more love within VII fanfiction.
Vega Kapera
This story is well written, has a balanced amount of detail and a varied language that makes it very pleasant to read. The dialogue is fantastic and it is nice to see how you use their inner voices, not many fanfiction authors are able to pull that off but I must say that it is a joy to see how you use that tool in your story telling. The amount of thought you have put into shaping the little twists exceeds what at least 85% of all fanfiction writers out there tend to do.
The one wish I have is that I would love to see more of Tseng. You present him wonderfully and he does, quite frankly, need more love within VII fanfiction.
Vega Kapera
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December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So I feel bad because I just noticed there are no reviews for this and well it's such a cute story that someone should leave you praise for the wonderful writing and even though I'm not so good with praise I'm going to try so here goes...aww it's cute and sexy all at once and I love the drunken lush Cloud and poor confuzzled Zack.