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for Niebel boys are dumb as fuck

by schwaerze

person Rina76
schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I agree with DS18 - het is hot when written by yaoi authors and even hotter when you combine it with a touch of M/M action! Pure het can tend to be overly romanticised and come across like a Mary Sue but there were no Marys to be found here and definitely no Sues! Just two guys, a girl and a lot of dirty, filthy smexxxx.

I love this fic. ^__^
person DS18
schedule December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sometimes I think het is hotter when written by yaoi fic authors, or at least more kinky. XD I really liked this. I hope it's not too much to wonder if you'll be doing the m/m/f thing again?
person heromoua
schedule December 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Why I was quite impressed with the story you got here, it was well written, and I enjoyed reading it. Shockingly it was very similar to my Untold Lockhart story, which you should check out.