rate_review Reviews

I have read all five chapters available up until now so I will offer a thought...

This is good, but I don't think it is quite reaching the same level of hotness as its predecessor for one reason.

You gotta relax, don't feel pressured to outdo yourself at every step. Try to imagine the next logical steps in the situation and go with it. As Yoda said, you must unlearn what you have learned.

In any event, I always look forward to more.

Streti, your Final Fantasy writing simply stands apart. You never fail to impress, and as usual your knack for detail and the portrayal of mood and tone are above reproach.

Awesome stuff. So more Rydia shagging next chapter? Can't wait.