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January 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ahmahgawd so good so far, i like your writing style, it seems to pull my mind into it and i canimagine all the facial fetures and scenery, just like a movie, so i'm really hoping that you add more chapters really really soon, so i can drift into the magical world of sexy sexy yaoi :) Thank you for being an inspirations to all writers out there ^_^. Claire.
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November 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
omg please upload more chapters, i will love you forever and ever X3
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May 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think they’re so hot together! It’s a pity there are just a few stories with this pairing. I like the way Seifer is dealing with the situation, it seems like he’s very confident about it, all cool and sensual. And I think that getting into Irvine’s pant is really a challenge... Seifer being a man and all. I don’t think that Irvine’s out of character, due to the situation he’s in. In fact, I think they’re all in-character. I’m so curious to know what will happen next!
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May 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I never imagined this pairing before but I actually kind of like it so far :3 I'm excited to see where this will go! The cliff hanger is killing me X3
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March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ha! That was good! Xd I hope Seifer will get him soon. ;)
I'll be waiting for more so please update when you can. :)
I'll be waiting for more so please update when you can. :)
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January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!
I must admit I read this a while ago, but when I saw it again today - and was disappointed that there is no update yet - I thought I could at least leave a comment. I really like the setting of a straight Irvine being persued by a persistent Seifer. By the way, it's a relief you don't describe him as a total arsehole in this fanfiction, but rather as very self-confident (but polite). I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Smailii1805
PS.: As for your writing itself: I don't know when you were critizised for it, but I think your English is very good and definitely better than that of some people whose motherlanguage it is (even though I'm from Germany and a little unsure in the language).
I must admit I read this a while ago, but when I saw it again today - and was disappointed that there is no update yet - I thought I could at least leave a comment. I really like the setting of a straight Irvine being persued by a persistent Seifer. By the way, it's a relief you don't describe him as a total arsehole in this fanfiction, but rather as very self-confident (but polite). I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Smailii1805
PS.: As for your writing itself: I don't know when you were critizised for it, but I think your English is very good and definitely better than that of some people whose motherlanguage it is (even though I'm from Germany and a little unsure in the language).
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January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
THIS is gonna be FUN! I do feel sorry for my favorite cowboy, but this is a great start. I can't wait for more. Do you do a mailing list or something?